This great! Poor George. Nice charactezation.

Loved it! This was fantastic! I loved the little cute, amusing references & inside jokes, cloaked in all of the bitterness. I loved how George was unbalanced now, how Ginny had too many wrongs to equal her rights, and Harry & Voldemort being total opposites yet extremely alike. BEAUTIFUL job, I loved this!! Update soon!

I like how this one was your longest yet. And the conflicts you showed between everything were great. Wonderful job here. :)

-honda

I liked when Ginny compared the amount o her wrongs to her guilt lol very m... filosofical

Aww! That was so sad! I loved Fred's reasoning, and Molly being loyal to Fred, and the last line (yet again...) and tying in the butterflies. Amazing job, update soon!

Aww, that was so sweet! I loved the Ron bit, and the butterflies still coming, and how Ginny is both weak & strong. The butterflies lifting her up was such a sad & amazing thought! Great job!

Oh, beautiful! I loved the first paragraph, Harry's descriptions, and how rain & fire are enemies. You have a knack for awesome last lines, too, as again I loved the last line!

Oh, this was great! I loved the last line again, and Molly's traditional thoughts. Great!

Ooh, haunting! I loved it. I loved how without Fred, their was no laughing. THe last 2 lines were fantastic...*shivers*

This sounds like a diary

"George kept swearing his twin had gone bananas..."

Great line. It made me laugh. :)

And I like how this chapter wasn't quite as 'sad' as the rest. Well until the end but thats okay.

-honda

I like it. Keep up the good work!

Loved your analogy of butterflies. It's so true to real life.

it's ok.:_

Hey the chapter personally i consider they are a little bit short, but hey it's ok just please keep writting!! and update soon!! =)