 QuietInsomniac 2009-12-08 . chapter 3Oh!
I've read a couple of your works before, and I've liked all of them. The Neji fic in the 20-Truths format was the first thing that I think I ever read from you, and since then, I've just gone through everything that you've written. Why don't I review? Uhm, I keep forgetting to. . . ^^
Now: I liked the way that you tied everything together-the Sielnt Fever thing being the reason why Itachi is so quiet? Brilliant.
I also like the way that you made everyone underestimate him, and then he just breezes through all expectations.
And the mistake that Fugaku made with the scrolls, it fit in *perfectly*!
100%! |
 theJiggly 2009-12-05 . chapter 3This story is extremely interesting, as are your others. I've been anticipating an update on this for quite some time - any chance you'll be able to post updates without such a long delay? |
 terrorofthehighway 2009-12-01 . chapter 3 Wonderful. Although- wouldn't Mikoto have taught Itachi to read? I can see Fugaku being strict, and not explaining the Sharingan, but shouldn't Mikoto pay more attention to her first born, especially since Sasuke has not yet been born? |
 Nebelkind 2009-11-30 . chapter 3This is so great!
Poor Itachi!
But he is so cool!
Please update again soon!
I especially liked the last part where he realised they never taught Itachi how to write!
:3 |
 Felosiyo-teh-ninjah 2009-11-21 . chapter 3Completely different and unique, as is the norm with your works. I really want to see more of this one! |
 Liisiko 2009-11-20 . chapter 3This is intresting, I like the idea that the Uchiha's didn't realize how smart he really was. |
 sarahlilly95 2009-11-08 . chapter 3Wow. Love this! |
 Crazy Iemon 2009-11-05 . chapter 3Whoa. I always considered Itachi a prodigy among prodigies (and therefore was really disappointed with the Sasuke vs Itachi fight), but I never considered the possibility that he could be such a genius that all think he's an idiot.
Also, that was really awesome with in chapter 2 with the animal parts. Like I said before, I always thought Itachi was so powerful not only because he was a genius, but because he had all the resources of the Uchiha Clan at his disposal. The idea that he was so brilliant that he learned how to fight from observing nature (like a normal, regular animal)...
Your version of Itachi, in all of your stories, is deffinetly the perfect shinobi. |
 Lady of the Hunt 2009-11-02 . chapter 3Yeah...reading is good to learn. XD stupid Fugaku. |
 Akatsuki210 2009-11-01 . chapter 3This is really, really good! I like your take on Itachi's early childhood, especially the part where his observations of the local wildlife show him how to win the fight with the older Uchiha boys. The only thing that doesn't fit is Shisui being one of Itachi's tormentors, since they're best friends in canon (otherwise Itachi wouldn't have been able to get the Mangekyou from killing him). Other than that, this is a great story! |
 Grand Demon 2009-10-30 . chapter 3Very good, the way you capture the unnatural oddness of a young Itachi. Its a shame there aren't that many 'good' stories about his background. |
 00asianwriter00 2009-10-29 . chapter 3Wow! I love it, truly fastinating. :D Keep up the good work! |
 Dameus 2009-10-24 . chapter 3Mannequin of the Muse is a BETTER author? Where might I find this person fictions, since I can't find that name here.
Also, *SQUEAL*, ITACHI BADASSNESS! I still hope some awesome "memory" Itachi is stuck in Naruto's head and when Sasuke tries to Tsykiyomi him...Well Itachi **-slaps him. |
 Mes-012 2009-10-14 . chapter 3Itachi=favourite character all the way in the Naruto universe. Great to finally see a fic solely about him. It's a pitied he died for that waste of a bro. Hope this continues =) |
 causeiambetta 2009-10-13 . chapter 3nicely written. but that was one hella big mistake itachi's father made |