 sarahlilly95 2009-11-08 . chapter 3Wow. Love this! |
 Crazy Iemon 2009-11-05 . chapter 3Whoa. I always considered Itachi a prodigy among prodigies (and therefore was really disappointed with the Sasuke vs Itachi fight), but I never considered the possibility that he could be such a genius that all think he's an idiot.
Also, that was really awesome with in chapter 2 with the animal parts. Like I said before, I always thought Itachi was so powerful not only because he was a genius, but because he had all the resources of the Uchiha Clan at his disposal. The idea that he was so brilliant that he learned how to fight from observing nature (like a normal, regular animal)...
Your version of Itachi, in all of your stories, is deffinetly the perfect shinobi. |
 Lady of the Hunt 2009-11-02 . chapter 3Yeah...reading is good to learn. XD stupid Fugaku. |
 Akatsuki210 2009-11-01 . chapter 3This is really, really good! I like your take on Itachi's early childhood, especially the part where his observations of the local wildlife show him how to win the fight with the older Uchiha boys. The only thing that doesn't fit is Shisui being one of Itachi's tormentors, since they're best friends in canon (otherwise Itachi wouldn't have been able to get the Mangekyou from killing him). Other than that, this is a great story! |
 Grand Demon 2009-10-30 . chapter 3Very good, the way you capture the unnatural oddness of a young Itachi. Its a shame there aren't that many 'good' stories about his background. |
 00asianwriter00 2009-10-29 . chapter 3Wow! I love it, truly fastinating. :D Keep up the good work! |
 Dameus 2009-10-24 . chapter 3Mannequin of the Muse is a BETTER author? Where might I find this person fictions, since I can't find that name here.
Also, *SQUEAL*, ITACHI BADASSNESS! I still hope some awesome "memory" Itachi is stuck in Naruto's head and when Sasuke tries to Tsykiyomi him...Well Itachi **-slaps him. |
 Mes-012 2009-10-14 . chapter 3Itachi=favourite character all the way in the Naruto universe. Great to finally see a fic solely about him. It's a pitied he died for that waste of a bro. Hope this continues =) |
 causeiambetta 2009-10-13 . chapter 3nicely written. but that was one hella big mistake itachi's father made |
 sillypanda 2009-10-11 . chapter 2This is interesting so far!
For chapter two, I'm thinking that when Itachi was watching the animals, he was using his Sharingan? Meh, you're to smart for me. :p |
 Adeptis 2009-10-07 . chapter 3Good story. |
 Stygian Styx 2009-10-05 . chapter 3Very interesting, though how could Fugaku not know Itachi coulden't read? |
 S1R 2009-10-05 . chapter 3holy ** this is amazing |
 Abe95 2009-10-05 . chapter 3Think...
I think a lot of things. Things too abstract to describe with words.
Basically, I like your chapter. Also, I believe Itachi has ADHD and extreme autism. Though my autism isn't extreme, I still notice how I am very good at some things and very bad at others. Most people are more average in everything. Jack of all trades, master of none.
Cya. |
 Fallen Dragonfly 2009-10-04 . chapter 3Heh, everyone always misses what's just under their nose. |