I'm happy you are back to writing this story. You have made a smart movement by exposing Casper`s dark side. Usually, in most fanfictions Casper is jut a goodie witness character, with no real weight on the plot. Everyone assumes that he is the impersonation of goodness, and that makes him boring to the reader.
Maybe you rushed a bit the plot by getting rid of the jerk too fast. He was a first class **hole (that's good, makes the reader dislike him), but you didn't gave much power or brains to your bad guy. Maybe is part of your plot and you are planning to focus the story in a point that I wasn't able to see yet.

I like your way of balancing things, now that I think of it, Stretch is showing a tender side while Casper is showing the worst of him.

You have a nice way of writing and describing things. You put no Mary Sues in this story, which is relieving.

I would like you to review the Casper story I'm going to post in Halloween. Is not only going to be a fanfiction, but a new series of Casper (actually animated) I will pass you the link on October 31th if you are interested.
I will also air the written version in My story is called "The Warm Spirit" (don't look at the one posted now, I'm rewriting it from A to Z)

Sincerely

J.Spiritto

O somethin' up with Casper! I' can't wait to find out what!~ Awesome update, lol. glad ya finally found

You Must Keep Writing Its Great

Please Keep Writing ^_^

LOL, 'chocolate'! XDD
Awesome. I like it!!

Oh come on, don't leave it hanging here! Give us more! :)

OH... MY GOD! Finally another good Stretch story surfaces! Your true to his charatcer, and you give him such justice! I really do hope you update soon. The plot thickens, and Kat/Stretch make such a good couple. But I wonder how Casper will react? OH! So many quesions to such a wonderfully written story! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!

I love this story!
Please, make more Kat/Stretch...please.

hey! I miss a lot reading this story, you got writers block?
is too bad, is really a very good story

OH!! i can't wait for another chappie to come out!! please hurry with it, i absolutely LOVE this!

Ooh, I LOVE this Kat/Stretch pairing! I especially love chapter 9, so sexy!:) I'd love to find out how they get back at Edward :D Heres an idea: maybe you could have a surprise ending, right at the end, Kat realises she is pregnant with Stretch's baby :) Please continue!

I've been reading and really enjoying this. Please update soon!

wow! you took my suggestion, I feel so honored,
I'm amazed of your dedication and your speed of update. Incredible, wow, and I couldn't stop reading this chapter till the last line, is so good. ^^
Please, please, keep going.

This is cute. Aside from small grammatical errors (question marks and commas missing) it's a really great story. :) I look forward to the next update!

~ Rebecca

d'aw
is so romantic right now!
you are a great writer!