i have to say i agree that ten should be with terry yeah the whole flush gang hangs over both of them but she is trying to do the right thing so why is she the bad choice if anything she would be the smart choice she has the moves and the brains i dont see why she cant be the next bat girl

see it as some type of community service undo the bad she has done with the good she could do

It's good that Terry made things clear that Dana is still in the picture. I liked his honesty.

I wonder what Jack is going to think about Terry.

Please update!

haha update soon! and Selina and Bruce were meant to be together!

Omg...I just have 2 say right know that they way that u wrote that 1 part where Bruce was telling Terry bout Barbra and Selina...u got their characters so perfectly! I was amazed yur writing skills...Oh and I surely hope it wont take u this long next time 2 update..lolz

I’m generally a Melanie Walker/Ten fan, I even wrote a Two-Face Story that has her as Two-Face's Lover.

Update soon!

Wowsa! You finally updated. I've had you on my alert list for like a year.

Well, even though I'm a Dana-lover, I love this! Can't wait for more:)

Hopefully it won't be another year ;)

This is really good. You should update more often. Terry/Melanie is always a great ship, the problem is that you can't drastically change either of the characters too much, otherwise the story goes from really good to really bad. My best advice is to minimze the character changes to gradual and instead affect the situations. Like instead of having them wake up the next morning a changed person, do it over several chapters but change the situations they end up in like fights with T's or Jokerz or anyone else. This is just some examples but it's your choice altogether.

Laters

keep going please! :)

Hi, nice start, I do hope you return to this story when you have free time. It's very good.

It was a nice chapter with that twist of Melanie being their waitress, that was funny...the only thing that wasn't all that good was the fight scene...I understand that fight scenes are SUPER hard 2 write...it is much eaiser 2 watch 1 then write about 1...other then that it was a good 2nd chapter!

Wow...this is really good. U matched the characters perfectly in my perspective...I look fwd 2 reading more chapters!

This is depressingly unfinished, but that is easily corrected. Now the story is good and seems to work quite well, and the paring is a damn site better then the cannon Terry/Dana ship that girl seems to have some hefty self-esteem issues. Then the writers expect us to buy that they are still together after ten years that does not paint of health picture of either of those two charters.

We know that Terry means well but he is being an ass to her and that is not such a good base for a working relationship. Although being Batman or even Batman Beyond now that has it's downfalls and old Bruce's requirement of not telling anyone about being Batman, has ruined any chance he had of being happy for himself when he was Batman. Not to mention Barbra or Dick or any of the other Bat-clan chances of finding happiness while still fighting crime. As such it seems he would see time repeat itself he seems to have not learned the most important thing for anyone is some support and love or life's just not worth living, and that is sad.

But that's a facet of the superhero genre if you keep this up it may be a very interesting change form the status-quo. Seeing as a Melanie with out the Royal Flush Gang hanging over her head is a much better idea for a girlfriend, life-mate, partner in super-hereoing or wife for Terry then Dana while a nice girl she is although suffering from a major lack of significant charter development. Looks over review wow that's long so I'll leave with this little plea, please continue goodbye.

just to let you know, its Mad Stan, not Mad Max ;p but its looking to be an interesting story.

great story please update please