Okay great story. It's a shame it's complete you have room for a really good story here.

I love the story, but this just isn't the right material for a one-shot.I'm serious.Your end is way too open.I mean, You don't know what's happening to Lena.You don't know if there's anyone still alive.There are too many un-answered questions.

This was so very nicely pulled off. My brain kind of tripped when I saw "251" as the year because I could never imagine it, but I really liked how the familiar terms were used in such a different way. The "Circle," Hyperion being Mahad's horse, the brigs being soldiers, witches...awesome.

If there's going to be more, I can't wait to read it.

I thought this was pretty good, I was freaking out though when she started to burn the village... I hope you post more!

that was a pretty awesome AU story, it reminds of marvel: 1602. good job

Oneshot ? You have a good story here you should add at least another 2 or 3 chapters.

Gah! You're so . . . depressing! :P

Nice ficlet, for all it was so gloomy.

Now go write some Dahlia-powered butt-kickery!! :P