Really good story. Enjoyed it very much.

I'd read the full version of this earlier, but whoever told you to post this chapter seperately is right- it's fantastic in its own right.

"The windmills of the gods grind slowly but they grind exquisitely fine." You sold me on that one line itself. Brilliant. It's full of meaning, sounds so mythical- very fitting for two demigods, and conjures up such surreal imagery.

Great love scene there. I'd be hard-pressed to find a more tender yet sensuous depiction of love in a fanfic.

Don't ever stop writing these. One can never have too much SMWW goodness after all ;-)