This was so lovely

I love female characters who can bake and are kind without being too Mary Sueish! Great story!

D: Woah! That was intense. I really like this story so far. :D Great writing and adaptation.

Keep on Writin' and Rockin'

I'm glad everything turned out okay for Ella in spite of Ella's efforts for the opposite. It was a great story, perhaps even better than the original Cinderella.

Loooves it... :)

I liked this story, the mythos was interesting, and left a lot of room for expansion. I liked the characters you introduced, they were surprisingly fleshed out for such a short story. The only downside was the epilogue, it felt rushed, like you needed a transition chapter. Other than that it was lovely. Have you written other original fiction?

I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVED this story. it was BEAUTIFUL!

I love the characters, they are so real, and lovable, and deep. THANK YOU!

That Cynthia is a vile wretch! and a snobby imbecile, to boot

So I'm home and sick and there's nothing new to read since the site won't let anyone log in... Thank goodness we can still read the archives! This is one of four stories (all yours) that have been distracting me from my misery today. I'm glad to finally have the chance to tell you how much I've enjoyed them. They should probably come with a warning, though... I've nearly spewed coffee across the kitchen laughing with you, gone through half a box of Kleenex mopping tears, and shifted quite uncomfortably through the steamier scenes. I've also spent an inordinate amount of time admiring how you manage to use the English language in a way that's always fresh and incredibly vivid.

Thank you for keeping me company and making my day a little brighter.

hm88

Utterly delightful story, edward is such a sweetheart. The way he talks is so witty it makes me smile alot :) I really loved this and the spin you put on an old classic, this is definitely a favorite.

Oh my god. This has to be the first time I've read something that consists entirely of OC's (or at least characters from a canon I'm not familiar with) and liked it.

Bravo, you fantastic writer. Bravo.

Okay, so I LOVED this.

...And I don't know what else to say. I was touched. I appreciated the unique details to a cliche story. I enjoyed your writing style. I adored your characters (except that bitch Cynthia).

Thank you.

-Arciere

I came to your site for the Harry Potter fiction and found this absolute gem. This shows incredible talent, because although it is based on Cinderella, you have done a great job with weaving a very unique twist to it. I love it!

I really enjoyed reading this story. Thanks so much for writing it!