Oh Lord *fans self* phew! That was intense and so well written!
Bravo my friend! Bravo!

I really liked this!
Now I want my Edward, please?
No, seriouly, this story is so good.

M, amazing. (:

yumm. haha... but it was good. very good. i liked it :D

I loved that they were being playful. Everyone writed the B/E lemons so damn serious all the time They like to have fun!

I'll be taking that Edward now. ^_^

pretty cool!

Loved it haha! Totally thought Edward was going to win. Good twist :D
Do I get an Edward now? :P
Really good one shot, well done.
Samantha
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Haha, that was good. Oh, Edward. Bella will always beat you. Or...most of the time, lol.

Angelica

LOL! Nice author's note at the end.

Wow.
That's hot. lol

Review review review! haha i can see that too, Edward loses. [grabs Edward and runs] great story!
~Cookie

hahaha...wow. =]

I can't believe anyone WOULDN'T review with that incentive! This is great! Like someone else said, sexy but without saying too much. Just right to get your readers all hot and bothered. I love the way the tension builds throughout. It also picks up the way that B&E are both stubborn and quite dominant in their way (I don't mean 'dom', rather assertive). I sincerely hope you write more PLEASE!!

m...yummy...
please write some more!

This was cute, I enjoyed it... Well done!