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virushunter981
2009-12-28 . chapter 2
Just finished reading On the Verge, and it was amazing! I do feel sorry for Aelita, though. Her wedding cut short by the pregnancy...

But I did love your little JxA scene in this one. Jeremy looked extremely bewildered there!

When are you going to update? Please do it soon!
BR0KEN-TYPE-WRITER
2009-06-22 . chapter 2
Hurray! I'm so glad you updated. I have been following On The Verge of Letting Go since the beginning (Back when I was Ravens Domain).
Since you said you don't have the plot completely organized yet, one peice of information that has been commonly overlooked is the matter of health insurance. In France, when a woman becomes pregnant the government pays for EVERYTHING (I like caps too ^ ^). They give you diapers, formula, strollers, what ever is needed. They also get a year off from work (I think its just the woman though, I'm not sure about the man.)
Regardless of being pregnant or not, health insure overall just about pays for everything, same with regular insurance. If memory serves, the average employee gets about eight weeks of vacation time and a month or so of sick days as the where Americans get none.
As for helping you with plot, having Sam put the baby up for adoption is a nice idea. But I don't think Sam's parents should kick her out of the house. Set limitations, yes, but nothing as drastic as Yumi's parents did.
On my FictionPress account, I also have a pregnant story going (which you inspired). Its probably been almost two years since I've updated (I'm worse than you when it comes to that), but whatever ideas I think of for it I'll be sure to pass onto you to make your story even better.
I look forward to more. Update at your own pace...Just don't take too long PLEASE!
~Raevyn
madness
2009-05-20 . chapter 2
when will you update this story
blah248
2009-04-09 . chapter 2
good chapter(:
can wait for more(:
pokelyoko
2009-04-09 . chapter 2
COME ON! I READ OTVOLG AND I LOVE YOUR WRITING SO UPDATE DAMMIT
pokelyoko
2009-04-03 . chapter 1
I just finished OTVOLG and it was the best story i've ever read up here, u r one of the best authors on this site so update quickly
Candice
2009-03-30 . chapter 2
Love it! update soon please
be my valentine
2009-03-30 . chapter 2
OMG! I HAVE BEEN WAITING FOR THIS!! Ahahha, great chapter, and hm, maybe Sam will keep the baby, but get like, really sick because of it?? And, hm...ahhaha what if Yumi got pregnant again right away? That would be funny! Idk, random thoughts. UPDATE SON!
ChrisPro999
2009-03-30 . chapter 2
Very good chapter! Don't feel too bad about not updating your story... I, uh, um, haven't updated any of mine in probably over a year... Anyways, looking forward to the next chapter!
Almighty Tallest Angie
2009-03-30 . chapter 2
Aw! Ulrich and Yumi have a baby together. =D
blah248
2009-03-19 . chapter 1
yay!
i otvolg a long time ago and i loved it!
so im super glad you started this one(:
cant wait for an update(:
FullOnenarutobleach
2008-09-28 . chapter 1
ASOMOME STORY I LOVE IT ALREADY (IS IT GOING TO HAVE MORE OR LESS THEN THE WORDS IN ON THE VEERGE OF LETTING GO IF IT HAS MORE IL BE USING UR STORYS FOR MY READING) KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK

UR NUMBER 1 FAN,
janzen2
be my valentine
2008-09-21 . chapter 1
OMG! YAYYAYAYAYAYAYYAY! I loved On the verge of letting go! thanks for making the sequel and please update soon!
Mylinda Antoinette
2008-08-15 . chapter 1
Hmm... well, what about that Aelita is... well, incapable of CONCEIVING children herself, but there's nothing preventing her from carrying a child? Maybe... she has to take medicine to make that part of her anatomy function normally... and maybe after her first child is born her body takes over and does it naturally because her body just needed a jump start... I dunno...

And maybe Sam has a miscarriage pretty early in the pregnancy...

And then when the Stern twins are older they end up getting lost and they have to send out a huge search party...

I dunno, just tossing out ideas... those are some things I might do with a story like this.
Demonic Angel DA
2008-08-15 . chapter 1
cool story, i was thinking about any ideas i may have had for your story and -even though it would be pretty hard to write- something could go wrong with sams pregnancy, like a mis carriage or nearly losing it. or Aelita is capable of having kids but Jeremy's infertile? hard to wright but it's ideas...keep p the good work and dont rush, you'll just do worse trust me.

P.S if at first you don't succeed, never skydive XD
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