exclimation points used to may times just make things VERY annoying, you should change it.

If it takes place before one story then that would make this a prequel

Wonder if that would really happen?Lol jk.

I liked it *

Thank you spazzgirl, you are the queen of narusaku lemons. You keep writing, I'll keep reading

15? thats a bit old... oh well.

and he drinks her breast milk? isnt that a little... gross? no offence of course. just curious as to why.. i mean seriously. has no one else commented?

OK Wow That was Good Lol

Wonderful

I would like to say that i have read many fan fictions by you and i am never dissapointed . your work is well writen and decriptive yet does not drag on. I love this fic because is is fun and light-hearted (and is my fav naruto pair) I think you are a wonderful writer and should continue to write fan fiction and one day if you do continue and write as a career then do not be surprised because you work is truely masterful !

:)

I loved it. So that's what his whiskers are for...

great story i loved it along with all your other stories keep writing, narusaku forever.

super awesome! great job!

wow great sequel and i think i'm gonna read "sakura's true love right now hehe

Pretty good story but really annoying when you write like this! It makes the text seem like someone is shouting or talking really fast! In the future you might want to work on this!

Okay. If you didn't catch my drift, stop using the '!' in almost every sentence. It gets annoying. But keep up the good work!

wow, that was cool, very cool.

I like the part where naruto purrs.

Another good oneshot.

I think you could've had Sakura control Naruto in the lovemaking or enhance his senses by stroking his whiskers as he took care of business so to say.

Good nonetheless.

lol. Cute.

You have some unncessary exclamation points lying around your story, where normal periods are supposed to be.

Otherwhise, it's pretty good. I wish I had the patience to just write and write... but right now I'm in the middle of a damn writers' block.