Eek, I don't have a lot of time (no time, actually), so I have to make this quick.

Loved it, though, you already know that :P. Just curious: does this mean that Ratchet is more...well endowed, than Sideswipe? I guess that mechs may not care as much as human males, but I mean, is he?

Ergh. I really have to go. Wish I could say more.

Awesomeness Okamichan! It's so good to see sticky again!

That said.

This is not exactly what I've been poking you for these last couple of weeks (months?) LOL

It is still great!

this was hot.

my bet is that the extra bet was that springer could 'lay' prowl, but I wanna know.

"Sidswipe tilted his head at Springer." I think you meant Smokescreen.

Still, you've got some interesting back-story going on here.

'm a bit confused. What bet? pls, enlighten me.

Why Smokie is always the bad guy? Nevermind, it fits him.
Loved how concerned the twins were when Prowl launched herself at Smokey's arms. Such a sweet moment. Everybody is jealous! Muhahaha.

so is Bluestreak apart of the family since he's Dustan too?

anyway this was good

and last sentence.

'The pit knows no fury like a femme scorned.'

rofl nice going twins

It's never good when someone seems familiar and then you remember femmes and betting was involved =) I wonder if Springer was a past fling of Prowl's, or perhaps he had used and left her? Sounds complicated...in a good way!!

Is this a hint master? ^_^ Awesomeness as usual! I likes the Smokeys. and giggle. lots of giggle.

Run Smokey! Run Sides! She's gonna figure it out and offline you both! XD

Hehe, that was awesome and apparently Sideswipe and Smokescreen meet before. But Sides just had to open his big mouth and almost cause a ruckus.

Great chapter, please update soon!

Great new chapter! It was really hot!

I loved the opening scene of the chapter. Great visuals over all. I had a feeling Prowl would weasel her way into Sunstreaker's softer side.

I am so curious if Prowl can talk Sides into allowing her to pose for Sunny.

I love the way you've made Prowl into a femme, it so different. Can't wait to read more on this story. Update soon!

very hot.