best zetdei story yet!I couldnt help but read it twice!

Wow. The Akatsuki are gonna be SO surprised when Deidara walks out of Zetsu's room in the morning. _O

make ch 3 ITS GOOD

I thought it was cute and romantic...in a bloody sorta way. I liked it D sucha cute paring.

...THAT WAS SO TOTALLY AWSome! Best lemon I've ever read, I swear. U did great! Zetsus my favorite character, and u captured his personality perfectly! Deidara too. Keep up the good work! Or rather...the bad work! Haha! I give it 5 stars!

Loved the story. I couldn't really keep focused though. I have to read this at 12:25 AM, so my parents won't ban me from all sorces of technology on the face of the Earth for the rest of my life. But what I COULD focus on was pritty good.

Keep it up.

XD

zetsu is quite possesive

OMG LOVE IT! THEY R SUCH A GOOD COUPLE!

that...was...FREAKIN AMAZING!

i loved it lolz

Wow, Deidara has a back-breaking bed and doesn't know how many ribs he has XD

And then he totally gets EATEN! D; But it was SO hot. Man, I am the most sadistic masochist ever XD

BUT that's okay!

I really liked this, because there aren't a lot of ZetDei fics out there...but I'm into crazy pairings!

I almost died when Deidara shoved the note in his mouth XD That just sounds so Deidara

Zetsu is a bit creepy, isn't he? I don't blame Deidara for freaking out! But his moment with Hidan was cute! Who knew Hidan could be so compassionate...

OH WELL!

I'm glad I read this when you already had part 2 up XD I don't think I could have waited

GOMG! LOVE IT!

I love this story, I faved it on my old account, and im going to fav it on this one. It's just so sweet, Lemony, and bloody Which means intant love from me 3

0_0 ...I love you for writing this. Just thought you should know.

yay! sexy sexy smuty smut! i'm a happy fangirl! *glomps you* i love you, you sexy sexy beast! you deserve an ass load of cookies and cake and lots of other shyte! kya i'm so happy now i loved the details you put;3 and the part about how he thought he was a perv, hehe i giggled through the whole thing