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aragonite
2008-09-08 . chapter 9
That ending was really sweet. I could see thier shock at his actually eating and Watson talking about the need for a roommate...good job and keep writing!
Wirral Bagpuss
2008-09-07 . chapter 9
Awh what a lovely end to a brilliant story. Thank you for a super read. Hope to see more from you soon! :)
FoggyKnight
2008-09-07 . chapter 9
NICE ENDING. I love how you returned to the first time that they moved in together to get Watson back into Baker Street.

Looking forward to reading anything new that you might come up with.
KCS
2008-09-07 . chapter 9
OK, all together now...AWW! MAJOR WARM AND FUZZY MOMENT! *glomps everybody*

What a stunningly, utterly perfect way to re-begin a friendship! You're a genius - I so wish I had thought of that! Awesome conclusion...I'm really really sorry the lovely story had to end. :(

One teensy quibble, the word 'ditto' has two t's. But heck with it, who cares in a story this charming!
FoggyKnight
2008-09-04 . chapter 8
Holmes must have been listening for when the doctor got up to start that melody. Big "Aw" moment.

"...protect me if necessary." *snickers*.

Update please!
Wirral Bagpuss
2008-09-03 . chapter 8
Awh! Am loving this story. So nice to see two good friends reunite !! Cant wait to read the next chapter !! :D
BakerSt.Bookworm
2008-09-02 . chapter 8
I loved it! One can only envy Watson in his joy at Holmes's return, it must be a wonderful feeling indeed. Can't wait for the next installment!
KCS
2008-09-02 . chapter 8
*dies* They're so flipping cute. ;D
BessieSchumi
2008-08-23 . chapter 7
very impressive story~I like their characters,especically Holmes~update soon~~
Wirral Bagpuss
2008-08-22 . chapter 7
Oh boy, this is making me cry !! A beautiful story and so very moving. i feel their pain. Looking forward to more.
KCS
2008-08-22 . chapter 7
Hee, they're so cute...
KCS
2008-08-18 . chapter 6
Wow, isn't it late there? Or early, rather? Not that I'm griping, but don't you ever sleep? ;)

You've pegged what I believe to be Holmes's thought processes exactly on the nose, I'm completely in agreement. Poor fellow, he wants so much to explain things and make them right and really has had no practice in doing so!
Wirral Bagpuss
2008-08-18 . chapter 5
WOW! This is an incredibly good story. I am hooked! I love the atmosphere you are building up here and describing how both Holmes and Watson deal with their private pains and fears. Cant wait to read more ! :)
The Fool's Hope
2008-08-18 . chapter 5
Oh wow! That's beautiful, and so sad. I'm glad they're talking about the dreams; it'll probably help.
FoggyKnight
2008-08-17 . chapter 4
YES! I guessed it! Well, sort of. I did forget Mrs. Hudson might have made up his own bed in the "guest" room. But there's really not many places he could wander off to in the middle of the night, and he doesn't seem one to sleepwalk...

Wow, this is more physical contact than Holmes usually tolerates. He must really be worried sick.

Looking forward to the next chapter!
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