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SnowLion no Miko
2009-09-27 . chapter 2
Great story! I love Aidou and Yori together and you did a great job! Loved this!
Jazz7
2009-05-31 . chapter 1
I haven't read the other chapters, but what I really like about your fan fiction so far is that in the first story the characters were in character. As much as I love this pairing, sometimes other writers inability to keep the characters themselves is annoying. Usually I don't care, but for this story "Lavender", I think it was essential and soothing (just like the fragrance itself) that both Aidou and Yori were in character to make this work.
Krissel Himura
2009-01-28 . chapter 2
waa~ this is really good! chapter 2 is superb! hahaha! i think they are now a crack anymore.. because there are some hints now in the latest manga chapters. haha! I hope you do more of them! haha! good job!
WhiteCloud
2008-12-21 . chapter 1
Oh please update!
kanaya
2008-11-21 . chapter 2
Update Please
DarkSmile
2008-10-31 . chapter 2
O.O wow that was really wow I could visual that so easily can't wait for your next update
serpentilewitch
2008-10-26 . chapter 2
Hmm...timeline jumps...interesting. This chapter seemed completely different from the first, as though it belonged to an entirely different fic. O.o

It jarred with the first one, and while it's well written, I don't think it fits with the first one. Am I making any sense?
serpentilewitch
2008-10-26 . chapter 1
Y'know, I'm simply captivated by this concept you've created. His being a stranger knowing everything about her (it's really the small things that matter, and the conclusions become endearing). I kinda wanna steal the idea, but argh. -_-'

Anyhow, excellently done, I really liked reading it and I absolutely can't wait to read the next chapter. And I noticed it's called "Acceptance". O.o Whatever might that entail? ^^

Cheers, and happy writing!
darkangel1910
2008-10-21 . chapter 2
This pairing is sweet and deserves much love.
crimson-clee
2008-10-19 . chapter 2
This is utterly beautiful and imaginative. The setting, the emotion, the conversation - it composes an intime and kind of hazy/mysterious atmosphere.

"Just think of this as payment for saving you."
Just to imagine him saying that, makes me go all I-love-Aidou
-coughs- Proves that he's in character, doesn't it? xD

I read it three times in a row and I can't say anything else than that I really like.
YenGirl
2008-10-19 . chapter 2
Well *smiles* A first kiss that wasn't exactly how she'd imagined it. But lovely all the same, huh?

Typical Aido, wanting blood for gratitude *rolls eyes* But at least he answered her query about Yuuki!

And wow, she really liked that! She really did! O.O That makes me long for Chapter 3 even more :)
YiN.yAnG.cHoOsE.
2008-10-18 . chapter 2
wow! that was good! update soon
Fabulous Georgina
2008-10-18 . chapter 2
That was HOT! The kiss, the blood sucking, EVERYTHING! Great job, update soon!
batmarg
2008-10-02 . chapter 1
Wonderfully written. And such an awesome crack!ship.
paper parasols
2008-09-07 . chapter 1
'lo there. This was a good story. WOW, is all I can say. And stare at it, with my mouth dropped open. O.O Who doesn't like the pairing Aido/Yori?

(don't answer that...)

*laughs* Hee-hee-hee. I always liked the stories about Aido being obsessed with Yori instead of the other way around, and this was really good! He doesn't dream of her, pshaw. *grins*
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