 SnowLion no Miko 2009-09-27 . chapter 2Great story! I love Aidou and Yori together and you did a great job! Loved this! |
 Jazz7 2009-05-31 . chapter 1I haven't read the other chapters, but what I really like about your fan fiction so far is that in the first story the characters were in character. As much as I love this pairing, sometimes other writers inability to keep the characters themselves is annoying. Usually I don't care, but for this story "Lavender", I think it was essential and soothing (just like the fragrance itself) that both Aidou and Yori were in character to make this work. |
 Krissel Himura 2009-01-28 . chapter 2waa~ this is really good! chapter 2 is superb! hahaha! i think they are now a crack anymore.. because there are some hints now in the latest manga chapters. haha! I hope you do more of them! haha! good job! |
 WhiteCloud 2008-12-21 . chapter 1 Oh please update! |
 kanaya 2008-11-21 . chapter 2Update Please |
 DarkSmile 2008-10-31 . chapter 2O.O wow that was really wow I could visual that so easily can't wait for your next update |
 serpentilewitch 2008-10-26 . chapter 2Hmm...timeline jumps...interesting. This chapter seemed completely different from the first, as though it belonged to an entirely different fic. O.o
It jarred with the first one, and while it's well written, I don't think it fits with the first one. Am I making any sense? |
 serpentilewitch 2008-10-26 . chapter 1Y'know, I'm simply captivated by this concept you've created. His being a stranger knowing everything about her (it's really the small things that matter, and the conclusions become endearing). I kinda wanna steal the idea, but argh. -_-'
Anyhow, excellently done, I really liked reading it and I absolutely can't wait to read the next chapter. And I noticed it's called "Acceptance". O.o Whatever might that entail? ^^
Cheers, and happy writing! |
 darkangel1910 2008-10-21 . chapter 2This pairing is sweet and deserves much love. |
 crimson-clee 2008-10-19 . chapter 2This is utterly beautiful and imaginative. The setting, the emotion, the conversation - it composes an intime and kind of hazy/mysterious atmosphere.
"Just think of this as payment for saving you."
Just to imagine him saying that, makes me go all I-love-Aidou
-coughs- Proves that he's in character, doesn't it? xD
I read it three times in a row and I can't say anything else than that I really like. |
 YenGirl 2008-10-19 . chapter 2Well *smiles* A first kiss that wasn't exactly how she'd imagined it. But lovely all the same, huh?
Typical Aido, wanting blood for gratitude *rolls eyes* But at least he answered her query about Yuuki!
And wow, she really liked that! She really did! O.O That makes me long for Chapter 3 even more :) |
 YiN.yAnG.cHoOsE. 2008-10-18 . chapter 2wow! that was good! update soon |
 Fabulous Georgina 2008-10-18 . chapter 2That was HOT! The kiss, the blood sucking, EVERYTHING! Great job, update soon! |
 batmarg 2008-10-02 . chapter 1 Wonderfully written. And such an awesome crack!ship. |
 paper parasols 2008-09-07 . chapter 1'lo there. This was a good story. WOW, is all I can say. And stare at it, with my mouth dropped open. O.O Who doesn't like the pairing Aido/Yori?
(don't answer that...)
*laughs* Hee-hee-hee. I always liked the stories about Aido being obsessed with Yori instead of the other way around, and this was really good! He doesn't dream of her, pshaw. *grins* |