I like the idea, and the way you've written it, but it seems more like their thoughts on bruce the billionaire, than bruce as batman.

Thanks for writing this! I agree with your author's note--I love stories where other characters realize that Bruce and Batman are the same person (and that the "playboy" image of Bruce is just an act). I'm looking forward to reading the chapter on Reese. Thanks again,

NiennaTru

This is SO good. I love it when people realize that there's more to Bruce than meets the eye. Aren't you going to update soon? I really, really look forward to reading this from Reese's POV.

Sorry to say but I didn't really like this chapter as much as Fox's but you're right she is hard to write about and all her feelings are basically revealed in the movie too. Oh well it was still pretty good. I liked the part about her seeing his regret it was good. Now what happened to Coleman's POV. It's been almost a month since you've updated! Like I've said before I too love identity stories. Please update SOON! And I mean immediately!! You too said there is hardly any identity stories and this one is a really GREAT identity story! Please write more or at least tell us you're still going to continue! Sorry for being all yellish about it but it's been a pretty long time since you've updated. Just please update!

"I love stories where people find out about the main character’s duel identity. I love their reactions when the boring/ annoying image they saw crumbles into someone they had admired all along; someone amazing." - I couldn't agree more, which is why I loved these two well-written drabbles (even if Rachel's perspective was sorta too predictable). I can't wait for Reese, either! Please, update. :)

This chapter was okay, but the Fox chapter was a lot better.

Great job of portraying all of these characters so far! I really like the way you've gotten in their heads!

Amazing chapter! I love Lucius and most of the time he's ignored or only used as a Q figure in Batman fics, loved it! I hope you expand this story after the 3 people. The relationship btw Bruce/Lucius/Alfred needs to be played well so we see this team working together :), be well!

I love this! Great character studies. This kind of story is my favourite. Good work!

Very nice. Looking forward to the next chapter!

I can't wait for Reese! I really don't like Rachel, So I'm not the best judge for this chapter. I do have to agree with you on something. The Rachel of the first movie is completely different from the one on the second movie. I can't decide which was better because I liked neither.

Yeah that was kind of a recap type thing. Still lots of fun though! I can't wait for Reese!

Yeah, Rachel is a hard person to write. But I think you handled her very well. And I can't wait to see the next chapter! I always love Coleman Reese stories

Yay more! it was kinda like the movie,but i love the end, i love bruce/rachel! I can't wait for coleman reese i think it would be totally awsome becuase it would come off as more of a shock becuase he's ownly aquainted with the lazy playboy persona xD Bring on the revelations!

I liked this a lot. I look forward to seeing what you do with Coleman. :)