 maximum-ride-23 2009-11-25 . chapter 10ur a mass murder! *gasp* haha
"Roxas,Axel is sort of insane" yea just alittle he's only murdered 4 people he's not crazy at all
good job so far =D except the evil cliff hanger of course *gr* |
 mei lynn 64 2009-11-25 . chapter 10AH!!-holds onto your leg and sniffles-You can't leave it like this! You gotta update again soon! Aww... I hope that everything is still going to be close to the same thing as before they were before Axel killed those guys. |
 mei lynn 64 2009-11-20 . chapter 9WOW! I can't wait to see how Axel killed them! OH! I gotta look that song up now! I really loved the ending and how Roxas explained why he went there. I really love how Axel took it too. He seemed calm when he was rushing out of the house and talking to the peoples and then... BAM! He kills them! |
 Chelsea 2009-11-09 . chapter 6 omg, this one was really good! i havnt read the rest of the chapters yet, only up to this one, but i loved all of it! (expecially the shower part...;)) it was really well written! :D |
 maximum-ride-23 2009-11-09 . chapter 9thanxs for the little feature in the begining dear =D
poor Roxy :(
whoa scarey Axel on the loose
If you didn't say that you would mention how they were killed later I would havewhined about that but now I won't when I was reading it I was just like "WHAT!?! thats all we get" but then read the little note at the bottom it's all good =]
alrite my extremely long review is over now update soon =] |
 maximum-ride-23 2009-11-08 . chapter 8aw Axel is such a softy for poor little roxie I love how emotional it is
you're doing a fabulous job so far please continue =D |
 mei lynn 64 2009-11-08 . chapter 8Poor Roxas. He won't ever be allowed to walk again on his left leg.-sighs- I feel bad for him. Now, for him to explain who those peoples were to the group! I wish both him and you the best of luck!!
That being said, this is a very good chapter! I loved reading it and I love reading this fic! |
 maximum-ride-23 2009-10-26 . chapter 7wow Sora is an idiot isn't he
poor Roxy =(
and what I was noticing were some mistakes here and there but then I noticed your last a/n saying you hadn't actually proof read it yet so yea just saying u should cause it is kinda distracting =/
well anyway update soon! |
 Wicked Winter 2009-10-26 . chapter 7very interesting.
Yeah I bought it a couple days ago and have been playing it ever since. My DS has died like ten times XD |
 Jumesyn 2009-10-26 . chapter 7Hi,
Just a word of note on biological facts. It is highly irregular for any medical establishment to request for two types of blood, one positive and one negative. Supposed Roxas can accept blood types O and A, then he should be of blood type A, commonly positive. However, an A+ blood type person cannot receive a negative blood type, especially not Axel's O-, and vice-versa.
Also, assuming that Sora is there, Sora is a much preferable candidate for blood transfusion, assuming Sora and Roxas are related by blood.
That's all. Have fun writing. |
 nameless14 2009-10-26 . chapter 2aw |
 nameless14 2009-10-26 . chapter 1aww that was cute~ |
 mei lynn 64 2009-08-16 . chapter 6Whoa! Where did that Roxas come from?! Although, I'm so more than sure that Axel isn't complaining!!XD Sora is suck a worry-wart!XP |
 Valentina Ivanov 2009-08-11 . chapter 6^^ Yay!! Another chapter!!
I hope that your feeling better after your whole surgery thing. If not, get better!
Amazing as always! Really like the story!
Tina ~VI~ |
 mei lynn 64 2009-07-10 . chapter 5Man. We have to get Roxas something to help with all of this fainting!XD Man oh man! This was funny as all get out! I love how Sora reacted a litle too late with Roxas and how Roxas knew that Sora was his twin from the beginning! lol It made me laugh! |