omg, this one was really good! i havnt read the rest of the chapters yet, only up to this one, but i loved all of it! (expecially the shower part...;)) it was really well written! :D

thanxs for the little feature in the begining dear =D
poor Roxy :(
whoa scarey Axel on the loose
If you didn't say that you would mention how they were killed later I would havewhined about that but now I won't when I was reading it I was just like "WHAT!?! thats all we get" but then read the little note at the bottom it's all good =]

alrite my extremely long review is over now update soon =]

aw Axel is such a softy for poor little roxie I love how emotional it is
you're doing a fabulous job so far please continue =D

Poor Roxas. He won't ever be allowed to walk again on his left leg.-sighs- I feel bad for him. Now, for him to explain who those peoples were to the group! I wish both him and you the best of luck!!

That being said, this is a very good chapter! I loved reading it and I love reading this fic!

wow Sora is an idiot isn't he
poor Roxy =(
and what I was noticing were some mistakes here and there but then I noticed your last a/n saying you hadn't actually proof read it yet so yea just saying u should cause it is kinda distracting =/
well anyway update soon!

very interesting.
Yeah I bought it a couple days ago and have been playing it ever since. My DS has died like ten times XD

Hi,

Just a word of note on biological facts. It is highly irregular for any medical establishment to request for two types of blood, one positive and one negative. Supposed Roxas can accept blood types O and A, then he should be of blood type A, commonly positive. However, an A+ blood type person cannot receive a negative blood type, especially not Axel's O-, and vice-versa.

Also, assuming that Sora is there, Sora is a much preferable candidate for blood transfusion, assuming Sora and Roxas are related by blood.

That's all. Have fun writing.

aw

aww that was cute~

Whoa! Where did that Roxas come from?! Although, I'm so more than sure that Axel isn't complaining!!XD Sora is suck a worry-wart!XP

^^ Yay!! Another chapter!!
I hope that your feeling better after your whole surgery thing. If not, get better!
Amazing as always! Really like the story!
Tina ~VI~

Man. We have to get Roxas something to help with all of this fainting!XD Man oh man! This was funny as all get out! I love how Sora reacted a litle too late with Roxas and how Roxas knew that Sora was his twin from the beginning! lol It made me laugh!

I like this story and want to read the next chapter!

-faints-OH! CLIFF HANGER!! this is a really awesome story! ohh!! i can't wait to see what's gonna happen next!

congrats on starting highschool by the way!!

You fixed it fast... o.o
Great ^-^
I just read the other chapters and I kinda like it... seems as if Hurt/Comfort isn't as bad as I thought oO ^^
Though it seems a little bit rushed and, well, who would let a boy live with him if he doesn't even know him for longer then a few hours? That's illogical, but the story idea itself is nice and because of that I'll just ignore these little flaws ^^
But I think you made Zexion a bitt ooc in the third chapter... the whole breaking/crying thing doesn't fit him well... though it could have something to do with the situation, I have no idea how it influences his behaviour...