 Lilaxx002 11/23/08 . chapter 1He's gonna kill himself?
NO!
Very sad fic. A little on the melodramatic side and House wasn't as sarcastic as I'd like him to be, but still, an all over decent fic.
May I suggest something? At one point you typed in "fail" instead of "frail". You might want to fix that.
Refreshing writing style, very angsty, I loved it. |
 DrHouseLuvr479 8/15/08 . chapter 1Wow! That was breathtaking. Your choice of words. How you described everything. How the quotes played right into your story. It was realistic because you know that House's liver couldn't last forever, and yet, I am so touched that he passed on with Wilson there. You did a fantastic job and I think you could keep writing. Next time I see a kitten I am going to think of House. Awesome work!
Christina :D |