maybe turn it into a twoshot? poor ollie's reaction to it after his date w/ cho?
<3 B

Fratie totally puts KBOW to shame, as seen here in this excellent carrie underwood cover. I absolutely love anything fratie, so great work!

This was pretty funny and also quite cute. Good job. :)
-b3lla

ahahahaha
ok, so it was more or less pointless and you made allusions to a carrie underwood song. ill forgive for the latter just this once because it worked and katie would.
and wow, i cant believe i was this far behind in reading your stuff! had i known i mightve logged in...whichever, you know its me at any event.
but yes, i love hot katies always the hot head in your stories and fred/george is always the one that always gets her roaring but eventually simmers her down, its a very nice touch between the characters, youd think itd be the other way around i suppose.
but yes, magnificently lovely

lots o love!

HAHAHA. As much as I love KBOW I love KBFW better so this was pretty much the definition of awesomeness! Loved Fred in this. I couldn't quite figure out whether he was helping Katie or just wanted to watch his captain's broom get royally trashed. :)

Oh how I do love these two. They have a great dynamic together the way you portray them - the character you gave Katie (because she didn't really have a very developed one beforehand) plays off of Fred's beautifully as well as being hilarious in its own right.

Funny and a perfect demonstration of how nuts things can get when you're just fooling round with your best friend. Smashing closing line.

Very cute, and funny.
Katie and Fred are great--they're like regular, realistic every-day-people who are just a tad over-the-edge. They're hilarious and perfect together in whatever they do.
I liked this story. It's very good at depicting just how well best friends will stick together.