Nicely written and well executed story! Grammar errors prevalent throughout the story, but I feel that they didn't detract from the overall enjoyment of the story very much. Looking forward to reading your other P3 fiction!

This is my favorite Persona 3 fanfic. It does a good job of expanding on the whole cast's motivations before the arena fight.

I actually had the same idea about the all of SEES and their personas doing something to help Minato.

y'know, in the 4th game Elizabeth isn't with Igor because she set off on a journey to free Minato.

Wow.. This is one of the best p3 fanfict I ever read. It's soo touching. Nice job on this!

The only thing that seemed strange is.. maybe it's too long to be a one-chapter story..

xoxo

Aya

Though sad, this is absolutely amazing.

pretty good, great narration