Aw.. This was very touching.

I loved this. Brilliant. You captured them so well. It makes me wish for more about the story on Earth of his struggle to keep his family together, but as it stands the Prowl, Lockdown relationship (of which I am not the biggest fan), is perfect... Great story. Thanks :)

I love your writing style. You have such voice in all your works, and such original ideas. I never really gave much thought to the LockdownxProwl pairing until I read "Odd Couple," and you've pulled it off so well that I really can't imagine Prowl with anyone else now. (MAYBE Bumblebee, but even that's kinda pushing it.)

I love this story--how dark it is and all the potential it shows their almost-partnership to have. (I'm totally hooked on Partners, by the way.)

I wish I could write half as well as you. You've captured the characters flawlessly. I especially like that you portrayed Prowl to have that weakness of selfishness. He ALMOST gave in to Lockdown and left his family for his own personal gain. I love that you gave the character such depth.
And, of course, I love Lockdown's sense of humor.

Between "Partners," "Odd Moments," and "Odd Couple," (and your new Jettwins story that I'm going to skip off and read once I'm finished typing this) I've got a good amount of reading material on my hands.

Don't ever stop writing. <3

OH MY GOSH THIS IS SSOO COOL!

This was great ^.~ Keep it up ^^

aw i wish he went with Lockdown that woulda been fun

Whew. First of all, let me say that this is a perfectly realistic story, and it's wonderful. Seems to blend so naturally with various canon details, it made me have to think about which was real and which was fiction.
I think this is a great explanation and example of their relationship, or whatever you'd call it. The way they interract just makes so much sense, even down to Lockdown's inexplicable sentimentality and intense desire to have Prowl join him. And Prowl's debate over whether to go or stay-- the way you wrote it and rationalized it made it a pretty hard decision. I still don't know what I would have done.
I like how you played it out in the end. Gave things a feeling of peace, but enough of a lack of finality so that we don't feel depressed thinking Prowl's stuck in a possibly bad situation.
Guess I'll start reading Partners then soon (finally). Anxious to see what sort of twist you spin, and I hope things turn out alright for everybody. ^_^
Keep up the great writing!
-Eloarei

Really solid, with lots of wonderfully chewy introspection. Also remarkably in-character, considering the situation. Loved reading this; it surprised me, and I don't see that often anymore. Thanks for sharing it.

This story was excellent. I love the way you delved into the character's personalities and how it wasn't immediately an "interface-fest." Not that I mind those, you know, but it's nice to see some fics with depth. I enjoyed how their personalities danced around one another like twin serpents. In other words, outstanding job, and please continue writing awesome fanfics.

That was very deep. I was getting worried about Prowl for a while there, but I'm glad he made the right decision. Despite the fact that things were bad, I doubt that being under a permanent contract with Lockdown would make him truly happy. Great work!

Oh my god. I'm actually at a loss for words, and you know that's rare for me. I lingered over this -- I've pretty much been reading it all night. And I just have to say, my gut is still twisting. The tension in this fic is pulled so tight it feels like it could snap any moment, but you manage not to push it until anything breaks. It's like walking the edge of an abyss and looking down the whole time, wanting to take to plunge but holding onto the safety of ground. This definitely counts as one of the best pieces I've ever read, fanfic or otherwise. Of course, it helps that we have pretty much the exact same view of these characters. I'd never be brave enough to screw with the happ family so much, but I'm so glad you did.

Ok, I'll stop fawning now so I can go off and read as much of the saga as I can tonight. Why were you so loathe to have us read your stuff? It's pure genius. ^^

Y'know, I'm not even a fan of TF:A, but I have to confess you made me adore this pairing. It's so dark and, well, kinky, lmao. This was just so wonderfully written, too, and the ending made me quite happy. :) Wonderful job! You've infected me with the Lockdown/Prowl fangirl.

What sexy sexy verbs. And conjugation. M yeah. That's hot grammar.

You are my favorite robot-sex-obsessed hallmate.

wow, i really like this!
i found it through deviant art... and, may i say, i love that drawing of Bumblebee and Sari- really dramatic.

...i thought you wrote the tensions and feelings in this really well, especially *embarassing to admit :P* the sexual ones..

hoorah for prowl's honour!!

:) love the guy... especially his chin. i mean, why on cybertron are the animated's chins so HUGE?
still, i love the show.
...heheh, well think i am going to read some other stories of yours tomorrow... when i'm not supposed to be doing revison :D

great one-shot... but will we see anymore? please?
(i bet you're not that bad at doing longer stories!)

I...wow.

See, left me speechless. Favorited, *and* saved for future perusal. Now I have to read all the TF stuff you've written.

Sleep? Who needs it!