Hehe, your stories are just getting better and better! You're great at writing Ironhide, the big ol grouch he his - showing his temper, pride, guilt all in a great snippet. G1 Ironhide is a fave of mine, he's just awesome!

AND you got some bot action too, which is always cheerin!

Ironhide and Smokescreen... Not sure I've seen THAT before. Very nice! *offers a chocolate of your choice* And an interesting bunny deserves a treat. Hope someone credits you for it!