Great job on this fic! I loved it! My favourite part of this chapter was when the fanboy tried to propose to Deidara... that was priceless! Thank you very much for posting this story! ^_^

Great job on this chapter! The " bartering" was very funny, as was the " girls can be scary when they want to" thing! Thank you for updating! ^_^

-is dragged along- -cries- XDD Funneh! The best chapter yet! Kakuzu managed to make forty bucks out of what originally was 15 bucks ^^ LOLNESS! Update! You're late this time, so you have to be early next time!.

Hey, good job on this chapter! I liked Deidara's demonstration... Thank you for posting this chapter! ^_^

Lets see...

1. You need to put CAPITAL I's!~ You have no idea how important that is! No idea, I tell you! I don't read stories if they don't use normal language in their A/N's and summaries. Besides, is it really that hard to press one more fricking button? Geez...

2. Oh great. So now I'm Itachi, Hidan and Deidara, and you're Kisame and Pein now? W00t! I get to be my 3 fav (minus Sasori) characters! (and Akatsuki members.)

3. Funneh ^^ Dei telling Toi to do it. You should have done it in leet (4k475UK1) That says Akatsuki, by the way. Poor Dei...I know how it feels. And NOW you know about reviews. Hmph! You still owe me one review after I give this one.

All in all, UPDATE! XD

Great job on this story! The " oh my jashin" thing is really funny, as well as you replacing swears with fruit, sweets and farm animals. don't let the lack of reviews get you down, this is a wonderful fanfic!

Yeah, I know -sigh- But at least I read. You owe me...uh...4-5 reviews! Review dammit! -cough- XD Dei tried to sell Tobi ^^ Madara would have been furious. But then again, I don't see why they need Tobi (apart from to brighten the mood). This time I have no criticism XD Keep it up ^^

WTF? Why are muffins your most unfavourite flavor? I'll never forgive you for this! -eats Banana muffin- lol XD Anyway, I've just realized that I didn't sign my last review...

THE LAST REALLY LONG ANONYMOUS REVIEW WITHOUT A NAME IS MINE!

Lets see...I've also realized you copied a lot of stuff! For example: I'm the only one who ever does this:

"Oh my Go-"
"Jashin!"

I withdraw my permission for you to copy it! Bwahahahaha! And there is also something else. You misspelt a few words. The 'Art' in my name is not spelt 'Ari' And it's not spelt Avacado. It's spelt Avocado! Avocado I tell you! -cough- Oh, and you sorta copied my flashback! But that doesn't matter, loads of people have flashbacks

Don't you dare copy anything else! Oh, and the 'deal with it' quote is mine too! It is my favourite word of the week! Haya! Blaa...

That's three reviews I've given you. You owe me two now.
Now for teh good stuff...

"Seriously Deidara, no self respecting man would scream over that, call yourself a ninja.”

LOL Who said that? And I shall mention that Hidan came into Akatsuki after Dei-senpai did. XDD The watch was ingenious ^^ But you still haven't done the AU thing. DO IT, I TELL YOU!

And your Tobi is hillarious ^^ lol Keep it up and update before I get ** and kill you!

OMJ You...you...HOW DARE YOU! -dies- How dare you put yourself as Deidara and make me Tobi? Wa -starts crying- You...-sob- meanie -sob-

-cough- I mean, nothing ^^ As usual, I have more critics (constructive, of course) than good comments...stick with me though :) critics first...skip the next few chapters if you don't wanna know...

Okay, firstly, you have to use correct grammer and spelling (what is with your 'noe') at all times, even in author notes. It ** me off really...if I ever see those stories, I just go back to the page and not even read, let alone review...but don't worry...Nextly, (wtf?) your sentences are long and windly (wtf again?) and some don't make sense.

Eg. /quote/ Deidara felt the urge to ask, although he didn’t really plan Sasori’s memorial to turn out like how it did and he didn’t really care about how much money they made, he felt disheartened that they made nothing./unquote/

Now, all your comma's are...weird. The first one is fine. The second one needed a full stop or ; (whatever that's called) Also, your sentences are weird. Don't worry, no spelling errors (I'm guessing you used Word?) Like this:

/quote/“I am not a kid... I am 300 years old...” Kakuzu muttered to no one in particular, then turning to his partner, “You should listen to her advice, show some respect to your elders, like me, how else are we gonna make money? You sent off our first customer in 2 days!”

“She said others not elders; anyways you should respect Jashin by doing so you will gain immortality!”/unquote/

Jashin just suddenly popped out of nowhere. WTF? I know Hidan repects his religion and everything...but seriously? (Okay, said Jashinist is definetely rubbing off me)...Also, your punctuation is...uh...terrible? You should replace your ';' with a '.' AKA fullstop. And after 'Jashin', you should put a '.' AKA full stop there. Correct me if I'm wrong.

And did I mention Itachi is totally OOC? He doesn't speak that much. Usually a 'hn' here and there or '...' somewhere else. And this is totally AU too. AU meaning Alternate Universe (not in the Naruto world since you have dentists and cars and everything). You should put that in your story description...thingy...CBB remembering it. Oh, and at the start, it seemed like you were trying to make your story sound funny. I never do that. I don't think it's funny if you try. I think it's funnier if you 'don't try' and write whatever comes into your head. It's crack. It doesn't have to make sense.

OKAY! I'M DONE WITH THE CRITICS! (constructive) YOU CAN COME BACK NOW!

I wuff your idea about them all lining up for the shower and everything ^^ And Kisame saving a spot for his precious Itachi-san...you know, if you continue like this, you'll probably end up writing ItaKisa XD j/k I know you don't like Yaoi.

/quote/Tobi volunteered, thinking that drawing tonnes of zeros and putting up ridiculous prices would be fun./unquote/

LOLness! Tobi is just like...TEH BOMB! (even though Deidara is actually the bomb...whatever) And I love your 'Pein glared, Itachi glared, Pein glared,' It was like a total glaring contest! Showing, not telling...man you're good at whatever my English teacher said ^^

/quote/“Damn you two, it’s all your fault no one comes, you’re just too ugly!”/unquote/

XP Kakuzu is so freaking awesome in here ^^ I usually make Deidara or Tobi the jester, but Kakuzu is so awesome too :) See, this time I've got more good stuff than before =D Be proud of me! And that's two reviews I've given you for one story now! You have to give me another review again...or else!

Not too bad, although your censoring of Hidan's words and replacing them with sugary-foods was only amusing for the first three times. Also, Zetsu is a cannible, not a carnivour. Well, he is a carnivour, but then again most of the people in the world are carnivours. Cannibles eat their own race/species. Carnivours eat meat. =P -goes off to read next chapter-

O.o -twitches continuously- Would you like to hear the bad things or the good things first? I'll go with the good things...

It was funneh yeah! "Senpai, what is junk?"
"Tobi, YOU are junk!"
XDD That part was...hillarious! lmao write write write! Zetsu was...funny...but the funniest part was just Kisame! His "Itachi-san' turning into Zetsu...XP

Sorry, but I can't write good comments apart from that so bare with me. Now for the bad parts...most is constructive criticism...don't like, don't read:

You totally copied my underlining and my sweets! You have to give me credit for it! Mention me in your authors notes or something! Or else I swear I'll flame you in the next chapter!

Another thing: You should have authors notes at the beginning and end (optional) of your story. And a disclaimer. You absolutely NEED that.

Also, your story is also somewhat rushed. I know it's not THAT rushed, as rushed as Max's is, but it's still rushed. You should try drag it out a bit, maybe talk a bit more. And I've just realized Hidan doesn't swear in every sentence. So maybe that? Up to you

Overall, GOOD JOB! XDD Review to my stories or I'll...send flying monkeys on you! I've recently borrowed some from my friend. I'll tell you the rest in RL!

hahahahah!
one word man!
lolness!