This was really great. Sho and Kyoko go really welk together, and you wrote this very well.

Interesting story. XD

I meant to say "I really like this!"

Is there more? I really like this?

Love the idea of the PV and how they acted it out. Sequel please?

This was good! I'd really love if you write to this a little epilogue ;)

Wow, this was kinda intense and really a bit cute, I'd say. You captured Shoutaro pretty well, I'm impressed :D

YYWKMN.

Haha, oh Sho. This whole one-shot fit him and Kyoko surprisingly well. xD

I read this fic again with happy fondness. Their dialogue just flows so naturally, and the way they fixate on each other in their strange love-hate relationship is oddly adorable. Love this pairing! Your fic really does it justice.

I really enjoyed this and think you did a really good job capturing Sho's character and personality.

That was good. You're right, more people should like this Shou. He makes things interesting. Nice story. It had a simplicity that gave it depth. If only this really happened...

I soo loved this fic! Thank you! XD

You... you brilliant, brilliant, horrible, horribly brilliant PERSON. You.
:O
I am totally pro-Ren/Tsuruga/Korn/hot character in love with Kyouko. And YOU decided to change how I felt about Sho? How could you! How dare you?
GAH! Now I have to, like, read a whole bunch of KyoukoxRen stuff and convince myself I don't like ShoxKyouko! YOU HORRIBLY BRILLIANT EVIL MASTERMIND YOU.
...so yeah. great story, as always :)

Oh dear...I laughed a bit manically throughout this entire thing. It was...just...magnificent. No matter how many times I think about it the idea of Kyoko watching Sho choking to death, pausing, thinking about it, and then finally deciding to KICK HIM IN THE CHEST in order to dislodge the piece of apple just cracks me up...Absolutely brilliant.

lol i could actually imagine the pv *O* shou was too cute ;D