I have to say, this is the first story for Illusion of Gaia I've ever read, and It's good. And adding the jewels was very good, especially the one found in Lances basement.

Not much else to say, I hope you update soon.

Excellent story so far. I love novelizations of games and Illusion of Gaia is one of the best games I have ever played. This story really brings the game and it's characters to life in a whole new way and makes every character and detail important. As I read it, I remember playing though these parts of the game and can totally picture the extra stuff in this story happening. In fact, it's all the extra stuff put in that makes the story even more fun to read.

Anyway, please continue with this when you get the chance. I'm greatly looking forward to it.