 Villain 2009-11-14 . chapter 4WAH! So sad. But so pretty. Will it continue, I hope? |
 PrettyLilJewGirl 2009-10-15 . chapter 4Woah!! That was really really REALLY good! I've totally forgoteen about fanfiction in the last year or so, and I've only recently started again... but I think this is the first review I'm leaving since my return from the dead. Because, seriously, how could I read the awesomness of your story and NOT review? I'm almost jumpin up and down!! I love so much about this... firstly, love how you didn't make Kyle a sex god. Secondly, love your style of writing- very descriptive. Also, your language usage is close to perfect... which is rare,especially here lol. Thirdly- I'm in love with the plot! It's so unique and different! And I'm also a complete sucker for supernatural thrillers, so im completely psyched right now!
So anyway... gotta wrap up the gushiness that is this review... basically, can't wait for more. Oh my God, I'm so curious! You better update soon!! I hope Stan isn't in love with Kyle just because of a love spell or something... although Kenny probably is :D Okay, shutting up now. But yay! So excited! Faving you! Keep it up!! |
 Norikumi 2009-08-25 . chapter 4I knew I was going to regret reading an unfinished story of yours that hasn't been updated in ages.
That's all that really needs to be said. |
 broflove. 2009-08-06 . chapter 4..I love this.. so much. |
 Itachi. Oh Enka. 2009-06-08 . chapter 4Minus the sex and the closets, I understand completely how Ken's feeling and the situation he's in.
I love how you've made Butters, innocenct yet angry because he can't have Kenny, like Kenny can't have Kyle.
I can't believe Kenny cried
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 Little Loki 2009-05-30 . chapter 2FREAKING AMAZING. If you don't update soon, I will have to tie you to a chair and FORCE YOU TO, IT'S THAT INCREDIBLE! |
 Nina 2009-05-12 . chapter 4 Sweet Jesus, this fic is amazing. Ultimately I really hope that Butters can make Kenny happy. |
 DragonSapphire 2009-04-10 . chapter 4This is so crazy hot and heartbreaking! I'll be so convinced I want to see Kenny with one person, and then someone else comes along and shuffles everything completely around. It's crazy how much it works! I love this! :) |
 daintypeony 2009-03-06 . chapter 4OH WHY~POOR POOR KENNY! HOW CAN KYLE BE SO CRUEL. Even thou Style and Beny sems to be the best outta this complicated situation, but I hope Kyle will eventually realize how much Kenny love him, and fall in love with him. Stan is such a brat in this story, he doesnt deserve kyle, in this story! |
 daintypeony 2009-03-06 . chapter 3woah, the love among the best friends. Maybe you should trying sneaking Cartman among too, that'd be hilarious. |
 daintypeony 2009-03-06 . chapter 2omg, it gotta be stan kyle is referring to...=_=
Poor poor keeny |
 ByoByo 2009-02-17 . chapter 4Aww...Kenny *hugs*
I have been in Kenny's exact situation and know it doesn't feel good (actually, it feels like crap XP).
Update soon, please? |
 Bethany C. MacKenzie 2009-01-30 . chapter 4...Oh, **
I'm like, seriously traumatized right now. That, all in all, was an amazing chapter, sex or not xD. I seriously seriously want to cuddle Kenny right now :x. If this was someone else writing I might start to hate Stan and Kyle... but no, it just makes me feel so... depressed. And poor Butters, getting hurt like that :(. I hope they all get their happy endings at the very end...
And pairings aside, this story is nothing short of amazing, on the emotional level at least. You describe them beautifully and they're all pretty darn in-character :)
Keep writing! :3
- Beth M.
(PS. Sorry for abusing ellipses here! XD) |
 PuffleKiss 2009-01-28 . chapter 4 The way you write is as if you've felt these emotions yourself.
They're just so authentic.
The reason why the story feels so real to me is because I've felt everything you've described. Though my own feelings were like that of Butters. Just less vengeful. Well, not really. But in another relationship I was Kenny but in the end, I was finally with my 'Kyle' and it was so sweet. For the first two months. Then it lost it's magic. I think the only reason I wanted him so much was because I couldn't have him and he was one of my two best friends. [Easy to say my other best friend was the Stan] So since I already loved him in the seance of friendship, the lust for something unattainable made me think it was love love.
God a rambled >.<
I truly enjoy this tale. Please continue. |
 RangerInBlack 2009-01-25 . chapter 4Oh my gosh! This story is making me sad!! Its so very good, but I feel so bad for Kenny. I really, really hope he ends up with Kyle!! |