|Reviews for Cookies|
| wraiths-angel 8/25/08 . chapter 4
good chapter, its looks like they are going to get some evidence but will it be enough to clear Nick, looking forward to the next chapter!
| El Gringo Loco 8/22/08 . chapter 3
A rather ominous twist to the story. Nick at least would appear to have an alibi for whatever has happened. But anything can happen deep within the depths of the FF authors mind. I shall be watching for updates.
| Mma63 8/22/08 . chapter 3
That's good. Look an interesting and have a good potential as story. Hope you keep working on it like a case and not turn it on a soap opera or something like this because the site is full filled of them. Domestic violence is something really sad. Usually women and men (don't forget mostly victim's are women but there are men also) don't report abuse cases because of fear, family or simply because deeply emotional involvement. Hard to say what to do, but i think that once the relation come to a physical or phsycological violence it's safer move on. Keep it coming.
| Mma63 8/22/08 . chapter 1
Looks really like Nick. Instead of trying to get rid of his problems he got himself in middle of a domestic fight. Being kind and caring for people sometimes could bring trouble. But how simply turn your head to the opposite site when somebody needs help? That's him and that's one of the reasons why many people like him.
| wraiths-angel 8/22/08 . chapter 3
oo, is the woman actually dead? that will make things harder for Nick, good chapter looking forward to the next one!
| wraiths-angel 8/18/08 . chapter 2
This looks really interesting, looking forward to the next chapter!
| El Gringo Loco 8/18/08 . chapter 2
Ch 1&2 An interesting and ominous piece of groundwork. I look forward to reading more and seeing what gets built upon it.