could you continue this?

really good, can't wait for more.;D

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! so cute! UPDATEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! i'm freaking out! please update soon! becouse i love it! XD

I really like it so far! D please update soon!

ARGH! My goodness! Don't just stop there! You are killing me!

Aw This is so cute! Lavi's a mermai- merman! XD I wonder what's gonna happen next! :D Pls update soon! XD

GASP. :D Please update this sometime! I know it hasn't been for a while, but it'd be wonderful if you could. x3 This is a really creative plot twist, and I'd love to see what kind of romance erupts from it!

OH MY GOD, MERMAN!LAVI.

Needs a bit of work on the grammar but thats all

Shit ka naunahan mo pa ako magupdate ng fanfic! XD Tinatamad pa kasi ako gumawa ng update eh, masmahalaga yung rp. -Snort- LOLZ.

Amf di mo pa sila pinagtagpo and Tagalog para onti lang ang makaintindi! XD Lahat ng Tyki ay capitalized noh and may mga errors din! CX

Oh can't wait to see what will happen when Tyki reveals that he's there! :3 hehehe

Yay! there's more! But you need to update! Need Lucky!

Update soon and I'll give you a cake!

TykiAllen? *Shudder* No pls.

Cross is like a walking red headed problem to Tyki. D:

I have to be honest I actually thought it was a koi but I was mistaken when I read the word "guy" and it was Lavi. XD

TYKI-PON! TYKI-PON! TYKI-PON!

Lucky will rule the world! :P

but if lavi's a merman how can they...

i'd forgotten the rating on this story...

don't mind me

It was a very good chapter. you are going to write a second chapter ne? please?

A cute start very interesting merman too :P will there be yullen too? not that I mind LUCKY XD