Liked it. Worth reading. Loved the fluff.

Hi, although I skip the fics about Jake/Rensmee, I really liked that one, so sweet. You could also check my first fanfic "Let me be your rock ?" and tell me what you think, thanks.

I loved the story!
it was so interesting and written so well:)

really kyute

Me again!

Awesome one-shot, just like the others. Please write more stories about Jake and Nessie, because you do it so well! I can feel the emotions of the characters clearly and feel identified with them, and that´s more than what other writer´s can do ;).

Thanks for sharing this with us the readers!

Cassio

I always look for stories with this kind of thing in it. Like, a little jealousy, a little cuteness- but it's always one or none. This story had EVERYTHING! Off to recommend to my friends XD

i dont know why i whas sure you were going to make her get up and wipe the fake lovebite from her skin (i thought it was just a charade to make Jake jealous).. but hey i love it your way too.

CUTE! AW! CUTE! Okay, awkward lol. But seriously, this one-shot was just adorable. =] Jacob was jealous lol. =D Great story.

~princess~

this was sweet and i loved it!! i wonder if anyone has written any good chapter nessie and jacobs?

i love how he was jealous and i love all the little touches and caresses you put in that really made their connection even more apparent...they are so cute together and i loved breaking dawn like i told you! lol..do you think there will be any more books in the twilight saga? I hope so!! great job! loved it! God Bless! ~alithompson

aww!this was so sweet.i really enjoyed,very nice one shot.excellent.neatly written,all characters in character.very good!i really liked it,plus its always good to read about Jake and Nessie.thanks for the chapter,a worthy add to the Twilight section!

Willow
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loved it

How fucking cute, I loved it!

I love Nessie/Jacob. This was brill!

This was all really good and I enjoyed it. I think you did a really good job of putting everything into one chapter but not making it feel like you were just skipping stuff because you just wanted to be done with it. This could have been a full blown story, but I never once felt like there was more to be said with the thing. Great job.

Samantha

I LOVE THIS STORY!