Man i hope Axel isnt dead, that would just be depressing!! Btw I love this story, its really interesting! I cant wait for another chapter!! :3

Oh! Axel died? T.T Well, even though I am a Sora/Kairi fan, that was way cute!

Grah! Axel is gone? No! If Demyx was there, couln't he have manipulated the water away from Axel? And couldn't he put out the fire that Esmerelda was in? Why?!

Great job on this piece, and I'm glad you're using more Notre Dame, because it rocks.