I like this story but with all the spelling errors, it's almost impossible to read. You're Canadian which means you should have a grasp of the english language. There are some words that aren't even words in this story. Please fix this.

This is a great FemNaruto Story, hope it continues

i have to admit that i was hesitant about reading this but the more i looked in to it the i couldn't stop it is a very injoyable read thank you i also like how you have made it that he/she dosen't suddenly become a god over night well done i look forward to your next chapter..

I hop Naruto starts getting her memories back soon

As you never mentioned whisker marks in Naru's reflection in the river, I'm going to assume they aren't there. Based on later behaviors, that assumption is the only one that makes sense, as the sand siblings would have noticed and commented right away. Also, that makes the whole identity thing too easy. : )

You have 2 chapter 6s. Otherwise, I'm enjoying the drama and dark relationship developing between Naru and Temari.

The question is how will they respond when everyone figures out that Naru is Naruto, and just how they will figure that out in the first place. Also, will Jiraiya actually succeed in finding naruto?

Please keep updating. I look forward to finding out. : )

awesome story

great story! update soon...

0/0 i think you should continue writing, i like your story ^^

It is interesting in this chapter that I never recall a scene in which the Fox Demon called Naruto by his name. I have to say exclusively, as far as I can remember, he's always referred to the kid by his pet name, Kit, or other derogatives of the same derivative, like brat. I'm curious if any of that is going to be taken into effect later on. That once Naruto's consciousness wakes up, Kyuubi's part in all of this revealed, it will be answered why the Demon showed favoritism at this moment. In the clutches of death. When so close to it once before, after the battle between Sennin, he merely was interested in his own inexistence.
I had to reread this chapter after the pretext for chapter 8. Where you reminded people that this was a whole new body the Kyuubi had created. Which I have to say is another thing that perplexes me... What is your stance on how Naruto's blood pact with the toad scroll would still resonate his chakra type, if chakra was a mixture of spiritual and physical energy, and Naru is a construct of Kyuubi's demonic energy? So far it would seem to be a hard argument to fight that Naru isn't essentially a figment of Naruto's latent memories trapped in the constructed body of the Kyuubi, and that is the only tie it has to the now, in all intensive purposes, deceased Uzumaki Naruto. Your argument from this point seems to be one traveling up hill, if Naru is going to revealed as anything more than a transgendered mock copy of the former. It is one of the reasons I will be eagerly awaiting the next updated chapter of this incredibly perplexing story. That and again, it's very very hot. Just had to point that out again. lol.
Till next time... adios.

This story is extremely hot as well as being intriguing. You say it's going to end with a powerful Naruto, but what will that do in relations to Temari. Will there be a whiplash, will there be reprimand, will there be remorse and reconciling - I mean as it is that process leaves alot to the imagination of the reader because Naru(to) is right now such a incomplete and conflicted character. Once things are figured out for him/her, what that will mean from that point onward, after all the things Temari has subjected him/her to, has come out as just incredibly bewitching for me as a reader. I cannot yet imagine the end result. Plus Temari has really so far yet to show us an ounce of truth as a character. I mean her strengths, and traits, and prejudices are there, but we've yet to see hesitance, concern, or fear from her. So far everything has been in her control. I am eager for the moments to begin to arrive where that starts to slip out from her fingers. And see what that does to her.
But for now it is very, very hot. lol.
I hope to see more.
Till next time.. adios.

I love this story! Keep up the great writing.

ok, this chapter was written really well and the dominateix thing seemed less influencial.
Although, the incest part at the end really disgusted me... That totally did not even help the story

Stupid girls! Just hurry up and finish falling in love already, and move past this not-very-healthy stage of your relationship!

I like the story. Keep it up!

An amazing series. I stumbled upon this and am loving it so far. I really love the dynamic relationship between Temari and Naru. Thank you for sharing this, I look forward to more.