Uhm... well that does seem alot like Arshes... but I dunno... Dark aschnieder is kind of an... ass. LOL... really though, I dont think he would tell her that if he didn't want anything "out of it".. XD

So few times do I find a nice, perfect, short piece on this site, but yours does wonders. I mean it...not just mindless backpatting. Keep it up!

Wonderful, I must say. Reading this filled my mind with well-detailed scenes and images of the events unfolding. In Anime, no less!

You certainly have a firm grasp of the character of Arshes Nei, as well as a talent for writing in such a character's perspective. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.

Very sweet and wonderfully written. Great job! ) You created the emotions of Arshes Ne perfectly.

A very well-written and accurate look into Arshes Nei's past! I had thought of it many times and felt so bad for her. It was interesting to read it from another person's point of view.

Rika, you are a master of words. Why can't I write like this?