 StrangeLady 3/22/09 . chapter 1Isn't this whole air hockey bet date thing from the movie bad news bears? Anyway good story. |
 Jia Min 9/19/08 . chapter 1 it rocks!
write more chapters! |
 uniquegirl 9/1/08 . chapter 1I really want to know what happens next so will you please update? |
 mewantpancake 9/1/08 . chapter 1lol, i loveit adn it needs a sequel |
 Xsaku-uchihaX 8/25/08 . chapter 1nice...love the ending |
 ryeochii 8/19/08 . chapter 1LOL.She'd lost! And she needs a dress. XD |
 Melissax3 8/17/08 . chapter 1aww i liked this a lot. |
 Merridaine 8/17/08 . chapter 1Haha! That was so unbelievably brilliant |
 ToraHimeSama 8/17/08 . chapter 1Ah she lost! haha...so she just comes and says...i need a dress. that's funny. cool story. hope u update soon |
 sasusaku779 8/16/08 . chapter 1brilliant! couldn't have written it better myself (hmm... not saying im a good writer, just thought that was a good line to use lol)
it was really really good! and smart!
witty!
perfect |
 Fukyuu no Tenshi 8/16/08 . chapter 1haha. cute
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