AW!

To bad she wasn't in the films, she might have changed Anakin more than anyone else. She is so much like him. Great right hook and all!

Nice little story. I'd like to see another story about Anakin and Ahsoka, and I cant wait to find out what they get up too.
Good story, keep it up!

Awesome! You really got the characterization down from the movie, and I love the way you portrayed their relationship. It really does feel like a brother and sister kind of thing. Great writing, If you ever did more between these two I'd love to read it.

“Oh and Snips.” She turned. “You have a nice right hook.”

*grins* That line made me laugh outright. Good job!

Excellent job!! I loved Ahsoka and Anakin in CW and I'm so glad someone wrote a story about them! Please write more!!

Good characterization of Anakin, especially in the bits where he compares Ahsoka's recklessness to his own. I really liked the beginning also--the "small puff of breath" made the setting feel very realistic.

Gorgeous!
A great little Master/Padawan moment. Great Work!

*chuckles* I liked this quite a bit. Saw the movie Sat afternoon, so I know what sort of context to put the story into so that it makes sense. And you're right, Ani and Ahsoka are very much alike. I can hardly wait for the series to start showing on Cartoon Network or TNT so that I can find out Ahsoka's fate. I hate not knowing what happened in the past of a character I'm writing about...

I won't be seeing the movie (it betrays the cartoon series, "The Clone Wars," which introduced me to the awesome Jedi side-characters I now write about), but this was a really nice moment. Definitely parallels Obi-Wan and Anakin (except Anakin probably wouldn't have relented as easiliy as Ahsoka XD)