OMG, this makes me want to cry with happy tears! I literally squealed at the end. The emotion is very beautiful. Thank you for writing.

this so should have happened.
thanks for writing :D

I LOVE THIS STORY! This is what should have happened. Period.
It had actually crossed my mind after I saw the episode that he should have gotten a jumper and picked her up like that, and I am absolutely ecstatic that you decided to write this story.

SPARKY FOREVER!

Great story! Love it!

I so wish your version could have been the real thing. A much better ending than what we saw on tv! Thank you for writing this.

OMG! Tell me how this was exactly what I was thinking the moment the episode finished on Friday. I was like "But they can take a puddle jumper and take her!" lol. YES! SPARKY MINDS THINK ALIKE! You are rockin' my world right now for writing this! :) Definitely a keeper! :)

now this is how it should have ended. I too loved the episode. It was one of the best written epis on the show, in my humble opinion. I just hated that it had to end so sad. But it was more of an open ended episode, maybe she will come back. I really wish Torri would come back. Anywho..all that to say I loved your story. By the way, I don't know if you have ever seen a show called JAG but your line about not knowing what to say is word for word from one of their shows. I'm not saying this to mean, I thought it was awesome! Cause I loved the line when it was on the show. Great Job. :)

Thanks so much for this fic! I was so sad after Ghost in the Machine. John had so much emotion that I can't believe that anyone would believe that he loved anyone else!

Awesome! If it wasn't for the fact that people a sleeping right now i would've been cheering outloud at the end.

wonderfully done, and I think more feasable then the idea that I had, although that on popped in my head too, LOL.
I think that Joe Flannigan deserves an Emmy nomination for GITM, and so do the writers.
I loved the fact that you picked up right afer the fade to black, and it was the perfect song to acompany such a great story, now if only the powers that be would find a way to bring Tori Higgins back, then all would be as it should, LOL.

Thank you for a beautiful story, a heart-warming ending to a heart-breaking episode. If only this could really happen...

Best episode this season and you did justice to an ending that was great but still sad. SPARKY RULES!

Beautiful. I really wish this would happen. We need Elizabeth back!