I kept laughing. (Except for Self-conscious!Yukimura. I AW'd then.)

I even broke out into applaude when I read the sentence where Yanagi plays out Kirihara's fantasies. (And Marui's future aspirations.)

Also, this is now my reference for future fanfictions. I hope you're alright with that.

Really amazing!
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Cant tell you how may times I started giggling to myself
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I find this story really awesome.

Especially with the Yagyuu and Niou thing wanting to be one another... It feels so real u.u

Great job ^-^

BUT WHAT IF HE DID?!?! AND IT WAS A SECRET! O_O I have gone crazy. Hanging around my friends will do that to you! But i still love them, their insanity and all!

OHMAHGAWH. Love it! X3

8. There are times in which Niou wants to turn into Yagyuu permanently, just because he's liked and respected more, and Niou hasn't ever felt like that as himself.

12. There are times in which Yagyuu wants to turn into Niou permanently, just because he has so much freedom to do what he likes, whereas Yagyuu himself always has to meet everyone's expectations.

Oh man. This was awesome X3 *needs more Rikkai love since she's losing touch to PoT* @_@; Naruto (series) is really taking over me.

LOL thankies anyways. Much love to you. 19 and 20 aren't bolded though. Still n.n

FAVED.

First, just wanted to point out that 19 and 20 aren't bolded.

Then... this is really good. Is there an LJ community for 20 sentences? Because that'd be fun... (I know we've got 30 kisses and 100 moments, but 20 sentences would be fun too... *might go create one*)

Second, I really, really love this line.

8. There are times in which Niou wants to turn into Yagyuu permanently, just because he's liked and respected more, and Niou hasn't ever felt like that as himself.

Mainly because that's how I feel.

And...

18. Yukimura is extremely rich, though he tries to hide the fact as it sometimes embarrasses him. He actually knew Atobe before meeting him on the tennis courts, as Atobe was a family contact, and a close one at that.

Dod. I have always, ALWAYS thought that. I don't know why... but it seems like he would be. Like, the whole born-leader, good at responsibility thing. *shrugs*

Anyway, I greatly enjoyed this. :)

~KA

P.S. Author is listed as... crissixx? *is very confused*

P.P.S. If you need help with LJ just ask. *is semi-decent with LJ*