Oh Karen... this. is. great.
its a oneshot, but its simple, and almost like a random - yet pivitol point in this couples' life.
and even though i knew the summary, you had me guessing where the weird behavior and newspaper reading was going. you're my creative wriing hero. And by the way, the "Realizing she hadn’t had anything to eat yet, she went to her mini bar and fixed herself a piña colada." line... irrelevant - and i love it. haha
p.s. sorry its taken me so long to find this little gem ;)

Very nicely written. Certainly anyone who knows the song knew what would happen but you put a definite touch of realism to it. I think most couples go through some difficulties and this was a nice example of that. Keep it up. :)

This was cute. Predictable, because I think we've all heard the song. So I knew how it would end. Still, I read it all the way to the end. Though I admit did skip around a little... LOL. I couldn't wait for her to arrive and confirm my suspicions. Thanks for a cute story!

Em

love it wish it wasnt a one shot

I loved it! hehe Will likes to get caught in the rain? Does he boogie in it too? ;) well anyway i really liked it great detail and i loved the angst!

Can I please say that this one shot you've comprised is fabulous because of these reasons:
1) You wrote it.
2) It's realistic. Not necessarily because people will put out ads in the personals and answer their significant other's call, but because it shows them in a non-omg-we're-gonna-be-together-forever-I-love-you-all-the-time kind of way. There are lows in all relationships, and even though it's not pretty, it happens.
3) You wrote it.

I loved it! I wish it wasn't a oneshot; i think it would make a great...not one shot...

That was so beautiful! It's... something different and very interesting. Also a little angsty (which I always like). I loved it! :)

I loved it!
Looking forward to updates on your other stories, as well!

I looked in my inbox and there was an update from the famous Williz! Shock! Then i realized it wasn't for her previous two stories-and was shocked again! BUT- I am very happy b/c I loved your one shot-well done! Even a little angsty I might add, but beautiful! Can't wait for you updates-tell your beta to hurry!

thanks so much! I love these one-shots, even though Id love updats, we need these too and its always great to read something from you. This one was fun, and interesting and definitely different. Really enjoyed it!

Excellent like always. It gave me something to smile about today. Good job and keep up the good work. Oh, and good luck at school this semester.

I knew it was the Pina Colada song!! :D Oh man, that was awesome. Elizabeth better hurry home because Will IS MAKING WAFFLES!! Ahaha. Killer oneshot.

Reason number 1,846 that we're soulmates: You're the only one I trust with my 70's music.

Awesome and amazing, as always my love!

Roxstar Galactica, signing out. :)

Aw :) Loved it! The "Elizabeth's loofa" line made me laugh out loud for some reason, same as Will's first question being, "Can we still have sex?" Nice, Will ;) Great job!