Aw! Poor Ummi and Toph...-y.

And the more I see it, the more I agree with the UmmiMommy thing.

'Course, I don't beleive that 'Koh Justice' bull I firmly beleive that Koh is either A) The embodiment of all evil, or B) Has a fetish for the Avatar's Girlfriends(or boyfriends in the cases of Kyoshi and Yangchen).

That was such a good picture! I can really see it played out here. Great Job!

this seems really good so far! can't wait to see what happens next! and are katara and aand going to break up soon? I hope so.

I like it. Lots. I love the whole Koh-Toph theory.

Excellent work, although, I hope you don't mind my saying so, but I think just a little more description would make this beyond awesome - and it's already awesome, just so you now. But I think you can take it even further than just 'awesome'.

I want more. Write more soon.

Very well done.

OHMITOPHYOUUSEDTHELINE. GAHI'MSOHAPPY.

Holy crap, Raolia. Do you REALIZE how IN LOVE with this fic I am? Why aren't you happy with this chapter? That's rediculus - I loved it. Not much motion happened, but it was almost better that way, because the words were really touching. Ahh, Ummi, how I adore you. Personally I can't see her as the type of person who'd say, "dear", but that's just me. Isn't she only, like, nineteen or something? Anyway, I LOVED how you had the Taang foreshadowing in there... "Maybe it hasn't happened yet." priceless. THANK YOU UMMI, FOR YOUR TAANG SUPPORT.

I know you worked hard on this one, but PLEASE HURRY WITH THE NEXT. XD I'M HELPLESSLY ADDICTED.

this was just an okay chapter for me. i love your writing but this chapter just wasnt great but then again it wasn't horrible. well keep writing!

Very Nice chapter. I love how you have everything set up, all the details andeverything.

Ive always wondered what would happen to the people if Koh stole their face.

figures that toph would find her face stolen more exciting then rejecting suitors!update soon!

Very intense, please update soon!

December'sRose

The Ummi-Taang theory is rather interesting. I assume this came about from Nightmares and Daydreams? Yeah, that makes sense, although I always thought they were foreshadowing Ko stealing Toph's face, or at least make a reappearance. You know, I don't actually follow Taang, but I do love reading Taangfic. For some reason you guys seem to be naturally good , you know what they say, Taang is always Zutara's best friend.

Love the story so far! You have a briliant idea.

But Jojo D8 I love this chapter *squeezes it* Ummi would definatly go Auto-Mom on Toph XD No doubt about that. And I really like how you described the darkness, and how they moved and stuff. WRITE MORE NOW *pushes*

Oh ho! Now THIS looks GOOD! I'm definitely gonna anticipate for the next chapter! :D

...This is freaking awesome.

8D

this is wow!toph's not dead...right?please update soon!