|Reviews for Facless, Sightless, Loveless|
| K9 the First 8/22/08 . chapter 3
Aw! Poor Ummi and Toph...-y.
And the more I see it, the more I agree with the UmmiMommy thing.
'Course, I don't beleive that 'Koh Justice' bull I firmly beleive that Koh is either A) The embodiment of all evil, or B) Has a fetish for the Avatar's Girlfriends(or boyfriends in the cases of Kyoshi and Yangchen).
| heartslol 8/21/08 . chapter 3
That was such a good picture! I can really see it played out here. Great Job!
| pisceanchic101 8/21/08 . chapter 3
this seems really good so far! can't wait to see what happens next! and are katara and aand going to break up soon? I hope so.
| jellyjay 8/21/08 . chapter 3
I like it. Lots. I love the whole Koh-Toph theory.
Excellent work, although, I hope you don't mind my saying so, but I think just a little more description would make this beyond awesome - and it's already awesome, just so you now. But I think you can take it even further than just 'awesome'.
I want more. Write more soon.
Very well done.
| RiaKitsuneYoukai 8/21/08 . chapter 3
Holy crap, Raolia. Do you REALIZE how IN LOVE with this fic I am? Why aren't you happy with this chapter? That's rediculus - I loved it. Not much motion happened, but it was almost better that way, because the words were really touching. Ahh, Ummi, how I adore you. Personally I can't see her as the type of person who'd say, "dear", but that's just me. Isn't she only, like, nineteen or something? Anyway, I LOVED how you had the Taang foreshadowing in there... "Maybe it hasn't happened yet." priceless. THANK YOU UMMI, FOR YOUR TAANG SUPPORT.
I know you worked hard on this one, but PLEASE HURRY WITH THE NEXT. XD I'M HELPLESSLY ADDICTED.
| OfficialWhaleSaver 8/21/08 . chapter 3
this was just an okay chapter for me. i love your writing but this chapter just wasnt great but then again it wasn't horrible. well keep writing!
| Togira Ikonka 8/21/08 . chapter 3
Very Nice chapter. I love how you have everything set up, all the details andeverything.
Ive always wondered what would happen to the people if Koh stole their face.
| musiclover9419 8/21/08 . chapter 3
figures that toph would find her face stolen more exciting then rejecting suitors!update soon!
| December'sRose 8/21/08 . chapter 3
Very intense, please update soon!
| Khajmer 8/21/08 . chapter 3
The Ummi-Taang theory is rather interesting. I assume this came about from Nightmares and Daydreams? Yeah, that makes sense, although I always thought they were foreshadowing Ko stealing Toph's face, or at least make a reappearance. You know, I don't actually follow Taang, but I do love reading Taangfic. For some reason you guys seem to be naturally good , you know what they say, Taang is always Zutara's best friend.
| Sobatra 8/21/08 . chapter 3
Love the story so far! You have a briliant idea.
| ZekeStar 8/21/08 . chapter 3
But Jojo D8 I love this chapter *squeezes it* Ummi would definatly go Auto-Mom on Toph XD No doubt about that. And I really like how you described the darkness, and how they moved and stuff. WRITE MORE NOW *pushes*
| The Samurai Prince 8/19/08 . chapter 2
Oh ho! Now THIS looks GOOD! I'm definitely gonna anticipate for the next chapter! :D
| Supinde 8/19/08 . chapter 2
...This is freaking awesome.
| musiclover9419 8/19/08 . chapter 2
this is wow!toph's not dead...right?please update soon!