Cute story. I liked it.

i liked it very much :)

Kakashi ought to be taken out, stipped and then flogged for lying to Sakura like that. But he's so cute you just have to forgive him. I mean come on, "a cascading crescendo of noise and bliss", of course Sakura has the excuse of a bad hangover, but it ended really nicely.

Hah! I loved this! It was nice and different

Only potential error I spotted was Oh god should have a capital G as it's a proper noun but that's nit picking!

I love this story, I have expected Kakashi to say it was a genjutsu but as it is, it is fab.