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The Lone Futurist 5/29/11 . chapter 34
Great ending! I know I'm writing this review a bit late, in 2011, but I just wanted to say how wonderful your story was. I felt kind of sorry for April at the end, because she couldn't ever go back to being her old "self" again. Nonetheless, a funny, heartwarming story.
Beserkians fury 10/27/08 . chapter 34
I love it!
Oujo ha Rippa 4/11/08 . chapter 1
may i just say as much as the storii is finished and this is onlii the first chappie O.o, i alredii luv aprils personality... god it feels weird writing the name april in third person.

:P i bet the rest of the storii will be just as good, but i had to write i love it so far! april reminds me of...me! hehe, and plus the name april helps i wonder if you can guess why...?:P
tatewaki2000 2/1/08 . chapter 34
WOW! GREAT GREAT ficcy. :)

Wonderful job, and I loved chappy 33. hahahaha

Nicely written and favorite zelda fic.

Going to favorites. _
AGoingUnder88 5/18/05 . chapter 34
Wow, the best fan fic I've ever read about the best game I've ever played! _. Anyway, I really enjoyed the whole fic and especially loved the surprise ending. I expected April to just wake up from a really long dream, but I did indeed enjoy the ending of her going back to being Zelda much more. And that goes without saying the stupendous writing skill that completely makes me feel like I'm April herself, lol. I also read your fic about Zelda from Malon's point of view and enjoyed that too, but this one is pure poetry! Keep writing, because after this amazing story, I'll definitley keep reading!
totallystrange 12/27/04 . chapter 2
okay okay what was that chapter for that is a little strange I think you should remove it no offence at all it is just that fanfiction doesn't like having chapters that are just author notes or mess ups like this one. By the way loads of people have written fanfics about some person or an other coming into a game it isn't any new idea so don't worry about plagerism. If you are really trying to beat that very very very very very very very very very very very anoying bongo bongo then I share your grief I have the worst arrow ame ever! I couldn't hit Gannon's Castle if I was inside it! Whispers don't tell anyone kay?
Lizai 9/7/04 . chapter 34
that was extremely well-written. What would have been really cool, though, would have been April's thoughts on the game and how it was so sugar-coated and different from the reality.

I can definitely see why April (or at least someone from America, where we girls are raised to be more outgoing than in Hyrule) would be needed to take the place of Princess Zelda. This was very well-done, and I applaud you. I like your Princess better than the game Princess. :)
Lizai 9/7/04 . chapter 23
...but the Sun's Song works on the Fairy Ocarina...
Lizai 9/7/04 . chapter 9
Messed up? That was cool! *keeps reading*
pHaNtOm-BlUe-InK 9/7/04 . chapter 33
Yay! This was a very good end of story. I bet i'm the first reviewer 'cause i'm the only one stupid ebough to be on the computer at 7 o'clock in the moring. Oh, well. Very good! I think you are an incredible writer!
Adriana 8/17/04 . chapter 27
Aright, you want reviews, you get a review.

I like your story, and i think your doing a good job with it, So i want to know the rest. Since i am a Beta for my freind, i can't help but notice a few gramatical errors. Nothing major, But they're starting to get on my nerves. So pleaseplaeaspleaseplease update!
Frank again 6/29/04 . chapter 13
send me an email...don't care what u say just send me one!
Frank 6/22/04 . chapter 9
you fan fiction is great because it kinda lets you see the inside of hyrule castle and lets you get to know the characters more like malon and link...now make a pokemon/donkeykong/link/kirby/mariobros. fanfic
maddy-t 6/22/04 . chapter 27
hi, great work so far.i think this is the best zelda fic ever. update soon. bye!
Frank 6/22/04 . chapter 4
this story is great
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