I squealed at the end of this chapter! plz update whenever you find the time and inspiration. I know how life can be so demanding when you have children to raise.

Excellent story so far. The Naru/Hina is believable, well-written, and not handled in a cliche "oh they're together now everything will turn out alright" manner. I eagerly anticipate a continuation!

squee!
i luv this story! ^.^
keep up the good work!

Oh, that was GOOD!

I can't wait to see the next chapter!

that was so cool can not wait untill the next chapter

This story is so cute! I love it! Please update soon; can't wait to read what happens!

Truth be told, I think this villian-Hyuuga is rather well done, honestly – so mired in "tradition", that he's viciously dead-set against anything that even so much as HINTS of deviating from it.

It's a well-documented foible, both in literature and in history – a perosn or country leading themselves to ruin, because of over-adherance to tradition. Kudos.

you are such a good writer! i hope yo continue this and your other stories!

I totally loved this chapter :D I thought it was so cute the proposal, and how Tsuande made Naruto realize that Hinata is pregnant. Now I hope the Hyuga villians don't ruin everything otherwise I will have to personally kill them...tehe ^_^

Anyway I hope you update soon I really love this story :D

I love your Hyuuga villian...in the 'pass-the-loading-time-between-chapters-by-imagining-him-getting-beaten-senseless-by-various-characters' way.

It's perfectly normal ;)

And if I remember this is the same villain who features in 'One Small Step' talking to Hanabi about...untrue things (no spoilers here XD), thanks to you I'm gonna have an unfair dislike for the first guy I meet named Sho.

Awesome chapter, please, please write more. I do love good fiction, fan- or otherwise.

Peace out and Rock on,

Anzer'ke.

P.S. AIE! THE CAVITIES! IT'S ALL YOUR FAULT!

P.P.S. Joke XD

P.P.P.S...or was it?

P.P.P.P.S. It was.

P.P.P.P.P.S. That's a whole lotta Ps

I really enjoy this story. Beautifully written and addicting. I would say "update soon" but I know you got kids so I'm patient. I know how kids are.

Yes! The moment has finally come! Plz update soon!

AW! this is so awesome!! i can't wait to read more!

I love your story, it's amazing All the chapters are incredible
Excelent work as always You're a great writer, looking forward to seeing more of your work

I couldn't stop reading! I loved each chapter. Awesome job. :)