The story shows an interesting concept to Crichton's trials and tribulations in the Uncharted Territories, and you've just given me a bit of an idea... anyway, nicely written, and with a few differences in Sebacean word spelling, it was fun to read! The chemistry of John and Aeryn was completely there, and it was so cute to how she comforted him when he needed it... great story!

Just wanted to tell you that story was awesome, and it made some things that were bothering me work. I'd been thinking about the fact that wormholes could go through space and time as well. Good job.

Very nice story.

Hmm . . . good idea.

I loved your idea and it was really well written. You got John just right.

Awesome story! Very skilled writing! Very good plot, characterization (sp) all that good stuff. I'm shocked you aint got more revies than this. Well, you're going on my favorites list, at least.

i had that very same thought about humans and sebaceans!