Wow!

Awesome job! :)

I loved it!

(Who is the pair though? I can't help but ask... I imagined it Keely and Phil...)

:) Essa

I loved it!

I Love How Descriptive This Is!
This Story Is So Cute and Professional Like! hahah
I think one day you could be like a screenwriter or
something, because this is so mature, and
adult! Great Job Keep The Stories Comin'

I swear your one-shots have the amazing ability to reduce me to a puddle. You know I can't resist Pheely Phluff...but I don't put up much of a fight either becuase I love it! great job!

Ashley,

Enclosed is a check for seven dollars. I feel so very guilty reading stories this professionally written without compensating the author. What a way to mark your return! Not just about a dance, the entire dialog, internal and out, is filled with fancy footwork, terrific two-steps, and the secret touches and whispers that only partners know about on the dance floor. You place us right there on their shoulders; Cupid should get such a good seat!

It's all the details that you include about how she reacts to him that pushes this into the payment-required level of writing. That's not to say that the structure lacks -- not at all! This truly is a dance, right down to circling back to the beginning of their mock disagreement. How could one love the other more when they both love each other with all their hearts?

Truly, your smoothly flowing writing is flawless and habit forming; you deserve to profit from it. We certainly are!

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Oh, Okaie (how do you pronounce that anyway? I say 'oh-kee' :P)
How do you do it?

It was wonderful. And you have this insane talent for staying in perfect character. Can't think of any more words of praise, so I'm gonna invent some.

Woodleboodle! Galoomp! Flaboofirous! Dandardabous!

I think that'll do us pretty well. ;)

Also, thank you for your review of Keely (chucking this in here because I'm lazy, hehe). I was kinda worried at first but thank you for being patient with them, haha. And when I say 'them' I am of course referring to those dopey kids we love.

I keep forgetting to tell people that it's an AU, lol! Kudos for getting it.

I'll try and finish the next chapter today.

Flimpdoodles!

-Nora

Pretty good, Ash.

You've got great writing.

Wondering if you take ideas for stories?