lol, Legolas is such a teaser.
And, while we're on the subject, you are such a tease!
It's like uh-huh, lemony, lemonier, WHAT? Where did that come from? (Pretty much my exact reaction to Pippin's "Ahem"ing.)
Oh well, it's all fantastic when you write it. The ending was also very teasy of you, but it's also really funny.
They are SO unsubtle.
*Do not think about Gandalf* *Gandalf is nowhere around.*
I think I'm going to have to start saying that whenever I see anyone concentrating. Thankyou for the evil inspiration.

I think you are right that the next chapter should be the last. As much as it will pain me to see the boys' story come to an end, I'm sur it can't possibly go on forever. I mean, without me kidnapping you and locking you in a dungeoun with a pen and paper, anyway. Which I would never do... ever... he-he...
But don't think you're off the hook yet. I'm certainly not the only one who will hunt you down and put a gun to your head (wait, isn't that where the genuiusness is kept?) and force you to write if you ever for a moment think about stoping.

I hope (read: you will make it so that) the next chapter is good and lemony and lives up to everything promised in this chapter. Best Wishes,
Marius.

Well I must say, you are very talented at writing sex scenes. Ha! This is a great story, and I love your dialogue!! Everything that comes out of your characters' mouths makes me laugh!! You're doing great! Keep it up!

lol. just love the ending lines

faith ^_^

you killed me with the cave thing, I think that this is probably my favorite story that I follow avidly, and I have like twenty stories... and no life... but, you're just exellent.

Yep, if they've run out of adventure, it's likely time to end this fic. But it has been a fun ride. Legolas is charming and I love his control in all situations. Just one question... since this is AU, what is Arwen doing coming for the coronation? I can't remember how you wrote her off, but am wondering if there might be some jealousies brewing. Legolas IS rather cute when he's vexed, so it might be fun to see him in possessive mode. I'm looking forward to the last chapter.

Lolol! There were, as usual, many parts of this chapter that made me laugh aloud!

"“Left!” he ordered.
A week passed, and then they arrived in the Great Hall."

Clueless - Aragorn is still clueless! :D

"It was sheer horror that kept Aragorn from... punching Elladan so hard that caves finally were created due to Impact Of Elf."

"When they parted, he knew very little about where he began or ended."

Poor, poor Aragorn! But oh, what a speech he gave about his plans for Gondor. Bravo! *clap clap clap* -- did that turn Legolas on? It should have, and more explicitly!

All your ahems were very well placed :) And WHAT sexual innuendos at the end - oh my! (:0 -- not that I'm complaining at all, umm-mm!

I shall miss this story, and all the laughs it brings, very much when you end it next chapter. Will there be some sort of bonding, you think, some exchange of trinkets? And perhaps Aragorn will finally write some poetry that makes his elf cry?

I don't suppose you will write a sequel to this. If you do, you can be assured that it will be MUCH appreciated and enjoyed, but if you don't, I hope you will write something else soon - I've gotten so much pleasure out of your stories, thank you!

...cave jokes XD
It's been a fun ride. Can't wait to see where it ends up.

Oh, Aragorn's breeches, how I love them XD
In a way that they are often the topic of humorous conversations, that is. Not in any other way .. you should direct your attention to Legolas when it comes to THAT kind of way ;D

I really am going to miss reading this story, but I also think that you have to stop while it is still good. It's better than that it would drag on endlessly (not that I would mind, but I think you get my point).

I nearly can't hide my curiosity for what you'll do with the last chapter :D
Merry Christmas to you too!

This is so funny. Loved the Hobbit 3 and 4, they were individuals! And the blank looks Legolas gives Aragorn sometimes, like when he mentions the winged crown! Great. I'll be sad when it ends but hope the poetry is going to be well worthwhile!

I don't usually go for the sort of romance, humour story you have here, but this is actually brilliant. Ah, the number of times I've laughed out loud - and not only is it quick witted, comical and well written, but it's undeniably sexy as well.

There's not much out there that is all of that. So keep it up! I've re-read these chapters more times than I'll readily admit, so really looking forward to more.

ahem.
Ahem.
A-Hem.
aHEM.
AHEM.


Remember me...? :D

I'm beginning to think you are having WAY too much fun here in Ithilien, in the tent and all. So am I.

So how is Legolas already acquainted with that cloak?

hah! I can breathe now, thank you! :)

I actually read this the day you posted it but was way too busy to review. But I've been breathing since then, lol!

Many things tickled me in this chapter.

A cloak,” he growled.
“Ah. It is very big.”

Astute observation.

"Legolas throws stones."

Statement of the year, hahaha!

And poor Aragorn is still clueless and befuddled. Hope the poor man gets to give orders and turn his elf on soon (no that the elf needs turning on.)

Thanks again!

This never ceses to amuse me. But the elves really should have given the story-telling to someone who cared XD

I think this must be my favorite chapter so far. Excluding, perhaps, the dead-idiot chapter. I haven't laughed so hard at anything in... oh, I don't think I ever have!

"“I am not pleasuring Legolas!” cried Aragorn, generously enlightening the rest of their company."
That's simply wonderful! How many of us have done the exact same thing. Well, not exact, I suppose. I don't recal ever having reason to tell anyone that I am not pleasuring Legolas.

"We are not talking any other sizes." - “It is very big,” he said."
I am still sore from laughing, which does not happen often. Except for when I'm reading this story, it seems to happen at least once per chapter. Congrats.

"Somebody. Kill. The. Hobbit." - "He almost wished Sauron was still around."
I love that.

"“I should call you House-stone for short... Or Stone House.”"
Henceforth, I refer to Aragon only as Aragon Stone House.

"“I thought we were standing up?” Legolas’ smile only widened. “If you insist.”" Ha! That's FANTASTIC! You ought to be knighted by the Queen, at the very least! It's almost that anyone has to nominate you for MEFA, they ought to simply pronounce you the best there ever was in advance and vote for runner-ups!

Marius.