very cute

Aww...

The vulnerable side of Toph, done realistically. Very nicely done fic.

so beautiful *bursts into tears*

very very beautiful I like how u look an the story an I cant not wait for u to write more

I like this story! It's nice and subtle... you can tell Toph is hurt, but you don't know how she got hurt/what happened/ect. It's nice to see a story when Toph is a little more vulnerable than usual, too. ] Great job!

And the ending part with Yue was a good touch. I always wondered how she'd react to the whole Sokka/Suki thing and Toph's crush on Sokka...

That was so sweet _

This was really good, and i loved it so much! Good job!