i liked that

Brilliant story

Aw! That was so sweet! I liked it a lot!

I wish I could know how his family reacts when they find out. LOL!

oh my gosh. .
this is so cute. .
they are so sweet. .
i love it :x

finally! Something hott, yet, sweet at the same time! I love it! and the ending line... "not sleeping- but dreaming" Perfect!

Wow, that was fantastic! I usually try to do the whole constructive criticism, but Edward seems to have...distracted me a bit, lol.

Awesome story! -bows-

you should continue. the next page should be when their at the cullens house. EMBARRASSMENT CENTRAL!

Wow. That was absolutely gorgeous.
Thank you!

Freaking AMAZING! This is definetly the best lemon I've read!!

Very nicely done!!

Ta.

i love stories like this, where they do stuff, but still protect their virtue. anyway, it was really good for a first try, and i hope that you write more stuff soon!

god

wow i absolutely love it. its wonderful.

Um... why hasn't anyone reviewed this yet? This is undoubtably one of the hottest i've seen around here in a while. Such a good job. Keep it up ;)