I remember seeing that movie when I was still a kid. I always thought that Amalthea belonged with Lir. It's so sad that they could'nt be together!! *cries amine style*

i thought it was very good. i loved how you named the child after Molly ^^ the story itself was very thought out and you kept well with the charactors. great job! ^^ and i'm a last unicorn fanatic too, it's also was one of my fave movies as a kid, and still do ^^

I really REALLY like it! enjoyed it very much!

I too, am dealing with a past obsession with the Last Unicorn! I watched the movie as a child and read the book for the first time as an adult-and it is a thousand times more magical than the movie ever was, even as a kid.

You did an excellent job of echoing the author's and movie's descriptions of a unicorn. Your summary of the story through dialogue was very powerful.

I don't know how I feel about Lir and Amalthea getting together and having a kid. The closest I can think of is good science fiction: accept the author's strange premise, and the rest of the story flows. However, it's not my work, but yours, and you did it beautifully. Do I like it? Dislike it? I don't know. It's like eating foreign food--it's just different.

Some constructive criticism/confusion with "But I knew he couldn't be killed. Unlike immortals such as you and I, he was something else. Something that truly was eternal." If the Red Bull is eternal, shouldn't we be talking about him in the present tense? You used "never fights...conquers...doesn't fight." Why is he suddenly in the past?

Keep writing! I am looking forward to reading more of your stories!

I liked it =)

Well, I haven't actually watched the Last Unicorn, but I think you summarised it quite well. The story is very emotional and I like it XD