UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! I love this story its full of adventure!

This story is beyond amazing! Please keep writing, and update soon!

I hope you update soon it's getting very intresting.

Absolutely lovely story!

I read the first chapter and just had to keep going!

Update soon!

Arg! (A pirate-y growl of frustration!) Update quickly!

OH PLEASE WRITE MORE! And please tell me when you do. THANKS!

**I meant thank you for updating instead of thank you for reviewing.

Ahh! Thank you so much for reviewing. This is easily one of my favorite stories on !

I really enjoyed this chapter. It was a bit dark, but chock full of exciting plot points. I really liked your bit about the difference between pirate captains and pirate crews! It was very realistic and understandable. I particularly liked Peter's course of action to rid himself of the pirate ship as well. It was very in character.

You've left us in a very dramatic cliffhanger! Please update soon! )

wow!

plz update soon!

plz update soon!

Ah, wonderful, simply wonderful!

I'm glad that you let Peter be "dark" enough to kill the second in command. I'm not sure if you've read the book, but the story is a little darker; many pirates actually die, unlike in the Disney movie, and J.M Barrie even mentions that previous lost boys have lost lives to the pirates and Indians.

"Scarcosta even considered killing Peter with his own dagger; the very weapon that had taken the life of her lover."

The situation reminds me of the twilight series, where Victoria tries to kill Bella because Edward killed her partner. Will Scarcosta go after Wendy to make Peter suffer even more before death? I could certainly see her doing that.

The only critique I have is that you have a few typos. I won't go into detail and pick everyone out, but thre are a few places where a comma is missing or a word is misspelled.

Overall, I absolutely adored this chapter, and am glad to see you update. I hope you update soon! )

-Alice

First, let me say that you haven't updated this in three months; it's one of my favorites on fanfiction! Please update soon!

Chapter eleven was very good. You did a good job with Peter Pan, as always. While most normal people would try to convince the captain not to take on the island, Peter is so arrogant and loves a challenge that he would be excited about an attack. Wonderful job with his characterization!

I'm a little confused about the ending, however. Did she mean to kill Morquin? Was she aiming for Pan? It could be a little clearer.

Great job! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update again. I'm dying to find out what happens to our lovable heroes, as well as your likable OC too!

Ah! you've put me in suspence! Plz update soon.

im loving this story so much! please upload the new chapter soon! im dying to find out what happens!

Great work, once again. I love your PeterxWendy plot line - it's so perfect.

My favorite part this chapter was when Peter contemplated the word "literate." That was very on par with his character and funny too.

Awesome job! Please write more soon - I'm hanging on your every word! )

-Alice