Michigan...other wise known as the mitten state...lolz, sorry i found that funny cuz i live in michigan

haha stupid people are so amusing and frustrating at times XD I feel lucky that I don't run into them /that/ often, yay for norcal :D



... I should really get to reviewing XD awesome work so far, I really like the idea.

Ah, I red the story once again (is it 3rd time already? I don't know, but there is parts I am starting to know by hearth 8D). And I am pretty sure I woke my neigbours when I was laughing for "the whole place had smelled of off-color contraband" :D And now, when I know your OCs better, I like them much more when I knew I don't need to be envious for canon characters.

I am still dreaming about the sequel, you know ;) You write this too well not to write it a little bit more. Pretty please? *puppy dog eyes*

Wow. that was incredibly good, and you get bonus points for having an OC & alt. location that I liked. You have a beautiful writing voice, I hope to see more. I would love an epilogue on this, (a bit of calm after that flurry of activity) but I can't figure out what you could write about, so maybe it is the perfect ending. I really really liked it, anyhow.

I absolutely loved this fic.

The way you encorporated the various shinigami into the storyline - omg Shunsui and Nanao as Renji's parents; I nearly died laughing - was absolutely fabulous, and even the way you handled your own characters - Leah, Raider - made it all flow together. Having a reader interested in new characters in a fic is VERY hard to do, but you did it, and you did it well. I was hooked!

This is the first fic I've read that had Renji as a strong lead character, and I was not disappointed. You portrayed him so well, and I loved all the emphasis you put on his tattoos.

Anyways, thanks for the read! ^^

Finally I had time to sit down and read this story. The first chapter was especially brilliant, yet I need to admit I was disappointed this didn't turn out to be a RenjixInoue romance story, sobsob... I looked forward it so much! Nevertheless, nice story. Renji was portrayed very well, him acting, being and behaving like he would.
-NiuNiu-

THIS IS **! THIS IS NOT RENJI ORIHIME PAIR! WASTING MY TIME!

Dear Renji's Girl

Its been a long time since you've updated ... Pls update as I'm stuck waiting for you to continue this wonderful story ...

This it... this is like distilled genius-ness with touch of gin and tonic!

I LOVE, and that really means LOVE the normal/not normal thing, and how you described normal every day life, with the not normal exitement and danger. Wonderful is how you managed to keep danger and action always there, but not too much, not so much it would affected badly to the normal side of the story.

THIS is what I have been looking since I started to read Bleach fanfiction! THIS is what I never found, untill now! Aah, is it possibile to have endorphine over dose? Because if it is, I am having it just now. I red whole fic at once, spare buying food ans sleeping, and after it a actually woke up earlier than needed, just to read the fic. Okay, you don't know me, but if you did, you knew what it means. It is, most of day waking world just can't win against dreaming world.

Ahem, less blabbering about how much I like this and more talk of what I like.

When I started to read, I fell in love the descriptions of normal life, like I said earlier. Then we met Leah, who I didn't like so much... It is not there is something wrong about Leah, it is just I was afraid of some sappy and syrypy love story, wich is something I can't stand. This was because of she started like Mary Sues usually do. Nothing major but still, just little thing, and the genre romance.

Well, I abviosly continued reading. Because of descriptions, I felt like I might be able to deal with Mary Sue and sappy romance.

When neither of them happened, I nearly went insane because of happiness 8D

Because of these feelings, I would propably picked genre "friendship" over "romance", but I can see why you chose romance. After all, it is there.

After nearly becoming insane for happines, I started thinking, and I tought how much self control it may have token. Giving the end you gave, I mean. Just some gentle touches and one kiss. Points for that, it kept everyone in character to the not-so-bitter end!

Sequel, sequel, sequel! (Without sappy love story) Sequel, sequel! (Propably still in America?) Sequel, sequel! (Propably in Las Vegas? Uuh! Somethin cool! Pretty please! *puppy eyes*)

nice, though its feels like there some loose ends here, will there be a sequal?

i would like to know if they finaly go home

...that's a good way to end it.

I'd want to go home too! lol

yey! forth person mentioned! ^_^

Ah. Once again, well done. At last, an intimate moment between Renji and Leah... too bad it was short. Nice work with the sword fight as well. Obviously, Aizen overestimated his mercs. Poor Renji.

Gah. Please tell me you have more coming?

Thanks for the story i like it, im wondering if you cut it short, hitsugaya called so sudenly, and what was gin's idea with giving the information to ishida. stil i like it