Great job with this! Very well written!

...I wish Stephenie would have include Edwards POV in Breaking Dawn.

oh this was SO GOOD! I got really tired of hearing about Jacob this and Jacob that and though the whole imprinting thing was dumb...I wanted more Daddy Edward! Thanks, I hope you don't take it the wrong way, but I STILL can't believe you're 14 and put thoughts about a father meeting his child for the first time down in words like this - AMAZING!

I really enjoyed this story. Keep up the good work!

Wow. This was something that Stephanie totally missed when she wrote Breaking Dawn. There were plenty of scenes of Jacob lovingly doting on Renesmee, but there was none of that with Edward. Thank you for giving us a glimpse of what Edward thought about his daughter. I think you did an awesome job of it.

it was...bittersweet lol well it was! good job

That was one of the cutest, sweetest, most beautiful stories I have ever read. I loved it! It was perfect! Not too long, not too short. Had just the right stuff in it. I loved it! This is going on my favorites!

Wow. Just Wow!

I don't know what to say. Just great. Amazing. And so Edward! Love it!

That was absolutely adorable, I loved it! :)

Wow, that was really good. Great job! :)

This would have been REALLY good for the book. Loved it!

That was so beautiful. I loved how Renesme is able to comfort her father when she's barely a day old. Obviously a very gifted child :) nice job!

Ooh, very nice. I love reading about the things that the books don't cover.

Good job!

-La Saboteuse

This is incredible.

There were barely any father/daughter stuff between Edward and Nessie in BD. So depressing...but I still love the book! -

You are an AH-mazing writer, and I hope that someday it takes you places.

I frogot to say that in all my other reviews.

Keep on keepin' on!

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I love it.

Congratulations! This story has been nominated in "The Breaking Dawn Round" of The Twilight Awards for the following categories:

Best Daddy Edward

Best BD "Missing Moment" (K-T)