This is lovely - definitely one of the better Lucius/Narcissa stories in existence, and an instant addition to my favorites. You have captured these characters perfectly. Well done!

Aw..cute. I have this current obsession with Lucius/Narcissa fics but unfortunately there aren't that many good ones out there. This is was so sweet. :)

Glad I read this. :) I've seen it up for a bit but haven't. Really cute stuff. Know you haven't posted in a while, but if you do, wouldn't mind seeing more of Lucius/Narcissa!

-Kate

nice insight into their characters, and i think you're right - i do think they really do love each other, despite everything. i hate fics where he's this horrible father and husband, because we just dont see him with his family.

Anyway - great fic!

The last lines made me smile. I loved how you put your own twist on the characters.

I loved it! It was very well-written and it ensnared me... I even forgot the two of them were evil for a moment. I absolutely loved it!

Also, I'd missed ur fics.

ZOMG! You LIVE! I don't really read the HP fics, but this was wunnerful. Loved eet. There were so many details in the story that made it so personal and so creative and inventive - Bliss, Lucius' thoughts on the rotting Black family tree, the innocence of their courtship, etc. I will keep an eye on you, Missy. I hope you keep on updating, even if you're not in AGaTB anymore. (Can't blame you, I'm not either.)

Speaking as a comlete third-party member who has no personal interest in the story of Harry Potter (and has never read a Harry Potter book in my life, but who ALWAYS seems to know a good deal about the characters...) I liked it.

It kinda had a softer feeling than the other fanfics that you write so well. The changes you made to Narcissa flowed really well with the rest of the piece. It seemed like a great way to come back to the Fanfic world. ;

I'm actually interested to learn more! Sorry for the late reply.

With all due respect (and coming back soon)

Capt. C

Wow! These two are quite the romantic couple! I'm actually begiining to like Lucius. I started to like Narcissa in book 7 when she asked Harry where Draco was. She just wanted to be sure that her son was safe. I hope you explore their relationship more.

Kirsten

Hm..

It was definitely not what I was expecting. At first I was thinking of something to do with Harry, Ron and Hermionie , then I saw it was about the Malfoys and romantic and thought it would be Lucius and Narcissa older, and then you completely surprised me by making them young and in love, giving a whole new twist on two characters I had never thought twice about. I dont think Lucius would be that romantic, even if he did hava an edge on it at times, but I agree with Narcissa being who you made her.

Great writing, as always, love your style.

-Meg

Sweet, pure, and romantic. Very, very nice. I don't see him calling her Cissa or Cissy, either, which is why in my Lucissa fics he just calls her Narcissa or love, or dear, etc., lol. I like your explanation of Bliss, though. I can see him calling her that.

beautiful and sweet. a perfect ficlet of an unknown couple!

I'm squealing in delight. I'll admit I don't think too much of Lucius and Narcisa, but when I do, I strongly believe they are in love...

This is very sweet and I think him calling her "Bliss" just seems to work well...

This was so cute! I loved it!

Well, well, well, look who decided to come back from the dead. :) I'm glad you decided to write again, even if it's in another fandom. lol

Knowing you, I was expecting something else (and you KNOW what I'm thinking...), but this was really, really sweet. Gross, you made me like a Slytherin fic. *shudder* I like that he calls Cissy "Bliss", it's romantic, for a Malfoy. And the little waxing philisophical vrs. waxing poetic argument at the end was funny, and sweet. In an evil, Slytherin kind of way, I assure you. ;)

Another great LunaEquus fic, can't wait for more. :))